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Damn you guys <3
Chapter 1 -
Dr., I loved your chapter. You amazing me, really. I hate reading anything about alchol abusers, well abusers itself, but it was good. It was bittersweet to me. I think you did great. <3

Chapter 2 -
This chapter made me cringe, but it didn't want me to close my eyes. It made me want to keep reading. This was wonderful. <3

Chapter 3 -
This is mostly my friends real life story, the urges are the same, but their are a little stronger at times. It's like apart of their lives. It's worrying me but Being for them is worth it.
This made me cringe, but anyways this wasgreat no wonderful.<3

Chapter 4 -
Wowww is all I can say. I love it. The emotion and everything.

Chapter 5 -
I can relate, but not really. Amazing job. <3(:

Layout is awesome.
All in all, you all did so well, seriously <33

I wasn't ready to stop drinking.

Ah, what a way to start! My favorite part of a story is always the opening line, and boy is yours a good one.

Your writing style...I get it. It's lovely. It's blunt, but not crude. It's not cynical or flowery or boring or anything. It just is.

The short chapters are very effective. They're short and awkward and are getting longer and more heartfelt. Like journal entries of people who geniunely want to change, but are afraid.

And reading it is a really cool feeling.

This is astounding. I feel like this story will hit home with a lot of people, because I know chapter two did with me. I was in an emotionally abusive relationship for ages. But anyway, you've written this so undeniably well. You're dreadfully talented and presented and executed this idea perfectly. Fantastic job, m'dear, keep it up! <3

I know you asked me to read only one chapter, but after I am done commenting on that I will most likely come back and read more.<3 The emotion in this was amazing, I especially love how she said that there was no bright light, God or angels. For some reason I got the feeling that she wanted help, but wasn't sure about it either. I really like this.<3 I'll be sure to read more of it.<3

This is a really good story!!
I can really feel the emotions and the regret that some have.
I feel like this was my own journal and I was reading my own experiences.
I don't know. I just really liked this :)

My previous comment still hasn't changed. I still love it (:

Chapter 3: Oh my God. This is, like, my life story; except for the urges part. I mean, I wasn't overweight or anything, but I feel like it :/ Right now, it's sort of like, do this, do that. it's fine. When you have an eating disorder for as long as some people I know, it seems to be apart of your life. It's very hard to stop all the urges and triggers and stuff. This was wonderful <3
Chapter 4: Wow. This one was wonderful. I wish I could highlight everything. I love the feelings and the emotions in it. It's amazing <3
Chapter 5: I can relate to this as well :/ [Yeah, I'm psycho.] I like how this was just the beginning of something amazing. I get the feeling that she's a bit...apathetic about it? That might not be the right word, but meh xD Amazing job!

You guys are doing wonderfully :D <3

I really like the concept of the story with the days and all. I think I know where you're going with this and I think it's great. Your writing style fits this perfectly because it's shows how the character started out to be and where the character ended up. I thought for a story in short words, it was simple and flowed. There was really nothing that amazed me or made me go wow about this, but I could see myself reading the next chapter or all even if they were this length.

*Also, you haven't commented on my story that you claimed. :)

This was amazing and it touched me :) *tears*

Very, very, very amazing story you have here! ^_^

I loved everything, and I haven't read anything quite like it. Sure I;ve read stories about drinkers and such, but this? I dunno, it's better.

Good job.

I loved both! Very readable and still well written on the topic, it was good! :) Please write more!

Oh my, is this the story that you were talking about? I FREAKIN' LOVE IT.
Chapter 1 - Dr., loved your chapter, bud. I usually hate reading anything about alcohol abusers, but your chapter made it worth my while. It was short, sweet, and to the point, but it makes the reader want to read more fast. Great job!
Chapter 2 - This was a wonderful chapter as well. It made me cringe. I can't stand seeing/reading/hearing about anyone being abused by someone who's supposed to love them and care for them unconditionally. This was great as well!
Can't wait to see what happens next (: <3

So do I. :D

Oooh, great update :3
I really like this chapter.

The same pair of dirty jeans and the same Dodgers jersey.

I hadn't seen a Dodgers game in four years. Ever since I started...

I came upon this sign yesterday, staggering out of the local bar, my pants wet from excrement and urine, my hair in a stormy mess.

I really liked those lines. And I liked how you ended it, with him being clean of alcohol.
Very nice. :)

More. D:<
Now.

Hee, please? (:
I love this.<3
Same fabulous detail as always.

:)