Like Knives - Comments

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= You're amazing. Seriously, I could tell you to write me a story about a chicken and I bet it would be great.

As for the question on if it was cliche, I'm going to say no simply because it wasn't obvious that she had cheated on him. You made the reader wonder what was happening until the last sentence of the story which I really liked. The underlying idea might have been a tad cliche but I don't consider it to be like I said because it was something I didn't expect.

You have a way with words.
This was excellent. You're excellent.
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Oh my god! That was so not cliche!
Unexpected was what it was! :o
Whoa.

Nicely written. ^.^

WOAH.
That was so unexpected. 0.0
I don't have any other words, other then AWESOME!

That was brilliant.
I honestly wasn't expecting that twist at the end.
At first, I thought she might be ill because you mentioned a doctor; then she said she was pregnant, and I assumed from her reaction that she didn't want it.

You're epic at keeping the reader guessing, I luvehs it<3

O.O

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WTF.

I agree with silk tea.

I.
Um.
Wow.

O.O

O.O I...what. I...words are not coming to me right now.
You'll have to forgive me.

This is great.
I loved it(:
The way you write is amazing.
The story was beautiful, the layout is gorgeous and I loved the ending.
Even if it was a move that seemed slutty-like, it was still good. I loved it.
This story isn't cliche. At least not to me.
Good job love(:<3

You should read over this story and edit.

Otherwise, it's really good. I like the way your writing flows. The story is not cliche at all, I promise. The way you wrote it made it stand out. It was beautiful. The layout was amazing. I really liked reading it, so thank you for sharing.

This was really really sad. It was such an original idea. But I can't help but feel sadness for the main character. He would've been so crushed and hurt... that's the way I would've felt at least.
Well done =)

Oh my. Though the last line wasn't meant to do that...it sent shivers down my spine. I thought this was going to be like...a murder story or something, however I was proven wrong. You led me in a whole new direction, and I'm thinking psh, she killed the baby... But no!

It's not his. That was brilliant. I was wondering why she was crying. I thought she didn't want it, and killed it. I love that last line.

Holy Nanners. D:
That is amazing.
This right here is writing gold.

You could've went in the more cliche direction and not a soul would've minded with all that lovely detail you have, but you went right for the heart clenching unexpected ending. I love your writing style. It all feels so effortless.<3

Amazing Read even if it broke my heart at the end. :)
p.s. the layout was stunning. C:

Okay so at first I was thinking, she has cancer, right? Cause ya' know, the doctors. And then she's all cold towards him so I'm like, crap, she's gonna' die. And then she wings the pregnancy on him and I'm like OHMYGOD! And Andrew's so excited, I'm so happy for him! And then she ends it with its not his, and I'm just like wow, what a bitch. I can't believe her! Thats not even cool! But this was very good. I'm as surprised as ^ her that you don't have any comments. This was very good. :)

No comments? What he hell? This was amazing, and it deserves pages upon pages. Lovely layout, as well. You're an excellent writer.