A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

HE NEEDS TO SAY THAT TO THE REST OF THEM!!!!! So they do something about her!!!!! This has me on the edge!!!!

I hope they do find who is her. I'm sure she's with the hunters.

I did a little happy dance when I saw the update :D I love this story :D Jimmy is so sweet with her :D I hope someone can find out who that nurse is.

Oh I swear to god, that nurse has gotten on my last nerve. Thank god, Arin was there and helped him. He is most definitely hiding something. Come on Mel, you're his fucking sister, if anyone can get him to talk it's you. He knows that she's no good, that's why he fucking hates her. I really like this a lot, please update soon. I have subscribed and will anxiously be awaiting the next update. That's all the story comments. I'm going to do your blog now.

Aww poor Zacky lost his wife and his first child, that's just sad. You people need to listen to her! That nurse cannot be trusted! Oh shit, I have no idea who that dude was, probably another hunter. I bet he gave her something that is going to be used to kill Shadows! I swear if that bitch kills my man...

So, Matt brought Arin here somehow right? Matt hates her too, good. It seems no one likes this bitch so get rid of her already! I'm kind of confused about the ending of this lol.

OH HELL NO!!! THIS BITCH IS POISONING MY MAN!! THAT'S IT! SHE'S DEAD, I'M KILLING HER! They need to get rid of her NOW! Oh my god, could it be her brother Arin? What is he doing here? How did he get here? I'm going to go find out right now.

Oh my god! This bitch, first she wants to say stuff about Shadows and now Vengeance, seriously? She is definitely up to something. Like I said, she is totally a hunter undercover in order to spy on them. Don't trust her! Get rid of her before it's too late. Aww Zacky kissed her <3 it's about damn time.

Aww Kaisy and Jimmy are so sweet together <3 Grr, I thought I didn't like this bitch before but now I really don't like her. She asks why too many questions for her own good. I still don't trust her. Good job Kaisy, telling that bitch off you should of punched her.

He doesn't want you Sharon, get over it. Aww poor Mel. I can't believe her parents sold her and her brother for drugs, that's just awful. I hope her brother is ok. Hmm...does Shadows know of him? I wonder... So it was hunters, what are you thinking Shadows! You can't go risking yourself again. I swear if one of them kills you, I'm teleporting into this story and killing some people. I don't like this nurse lady, she seems suspicious. I bet she's one of the hunters undercover as a nurse! lol don't trust her!

Aww, it's about time Zacky showed a more softer side. He is genuinely worried about Shadows as the rest of the guys are. Hmm...I don't know what the frame of that he was looking at. Maybe it has to do with something in his past? That's my guess.

Someone stabbed Shadows huh. It looks like I'm going to have to kill some people lol. Uh oh, if it was hunters then they are all fucked. They better come up with some sort of plan and fast, the hunters could strike again.

Aww, Mel found Matt and he isn't looking so good. I hope he's ok. You need to explain to me what the hell happened to my man and who I need to kill if anyone for hurting him. How dare Master Vengeance talk to her like that, especially since she found Matt! Those stupid bitches, Zacky how could you fall for that bullshit. Aww, Matt and Mel obviously care for each other, that's so sweet. It looks like Kaisy isn't the only one who gets to call her master by his first name. I'm sure they've about learned all their names now thanks to them saying it to each other. Another awesome chapter.

Uh oh! Where did my baby go? He needs to come back. I honestly have no idea where he could've went. Maybe he ran off somewhere or he's hiding somewhere, idk. Oh no, there is tension between Kaisy and Jess, that's not good. I think Jess is jealous of Kaisy maybe because she had feelings for Master Shaddix too, again idk lol. Or maybe she's jealous that she gets treated better than them since she's always the favorite or something? As for Mel, maybe she just doesn't like to see friends fighting. I know I would be upset if I saw my friends fighting and she seems like a really sensitive, innocent little girl honestly. I really liked this chapter.

Bad Kaisy being attracted to Gates but who can blame her, I mean he is Synyster Fucking Gates lol. Anyways, I think Jimmy was just angry because of Adrianna and that's why he came in the room all pissed. Aww, even though he is her master, Kaisy is so sweet and compassionate. They really aren't the monsters you would think of them to be. Oh, she gets to call him Jimmy now, that goes to show that he is fond of her. Great chapter.

Oh shit! He bit her. Thank god Master Gates came when he did, especially after hearing about Matt's past and how he killed Angelina. I feel kind of bad for Shadows too, he is probably really guilty. These guys obviously have some problems lol.

Aww poor Jess, she's like the mother out of all three of them, it's touching how close these girls are. Hmm... Master Vengeance is acting kind of nice as well. It seems these guys aren't as bad as they look but I could be underestimating them haha.

Oh my god! I loved this chapter! It was so good! I hate that it was so short :( I'm surprised that Brian didn't just make her have sex with him. It seems that he isn't as bad as you would think either. Anyways, so Jimmy was in love with another woman huh and he obviously is growing a small spot for Kaisy but it looks like Brian just might be too. Love triangle! Uh oh, Mel screaming can't be good. I wonder what Shadows did to her. Time to go find out. *rushes to go find out what happened*

You're a good friend Mel but you just lied to Shadows and now you're in for it.

Oh my, Jess must now face the wrath of Shadows, she should be very afraid. Although, he is so fucking hot when he's angry just ugh but also scary, very scary. Oh no, now Mel is probably going to get in trouble too. This can't be good.