A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

Well, I was partially right. It was Shadows who yelled and came first but then Brian came too so yeah. Mmm Jimmy seduction, I would be puddy in that man's hands or any of theirs to be honest. Damn you Brian for interrupting lol. I'm kind of scared to know what Gates is going to do to her and as for Adrianna or Arianna I'm not sure because you switched it, I don't want to know what she's in for when Master Rev finds her. Loved this chapter!

Michelle seems like a cool lady. Oh, so she has a thing with Johnny huh. It looks like Johnny isn't all that bad after all or so it seems. Oh hell no! This bitch! Good job Mel for standing your ground and standing up to her, don't let anyone get you down! Oh shit, that bitch just slapped Mel in the face, you're done now bitch! GO JESS BEAT HER ASS!!! Sorry, I just have a thing for fights in stories lol. Ah shit, they're in trouble now and it's only their first day here. So much for making a good impression but that bitch deserved what she got. Hmm... I don't know it could be any one of them well except Shadows and Johnny. I'm going to say...Brian. Now I must go see if I'm right.

Michelle seems like a cool lady. Oh, so she has a thing with Johnny huh. It looks like Johnny isn't all that bad after all or so it seems. Oh hel no! This bitch! Good job Mel for standing your ground and standing up to her, don't let anyone get you down! Oh shit, that bitch just slapped Mel in the face, you're done now bitch! GO JESS BEAT HER ASS!!! Sorry, I just have a thing for fights in stories lol. Ah shit, they're in trouble now and it's only their first day here. So much for making a good impression but that bitch deserved what she got. Hmm... I don't know it could be any one of them well except Shadows. I'm going to say...Brian. Now I must go see if I'm right.

So it seems Jess is the protective one of the group, Kaisy the rebellious one, and I'm not really sure about Mel lol. Their lifestlye is obviously going to be different now since they actually have rooms and don't have to wear rags. It seems things are looking up but are they really? lol.

Oh I like Kaisy. I have a thing for feisty girls in stories, they make things really interesting. You tell him girl! Of course it was a bad idea though and yes looks can be very decieving. Great chapter.

I'm glad Mel is ok. She's very obedient towards these guys despite being trouble for her other master but I can't blame her because these guys are a lot more intimidating. So, they are vampires. Mmm, sexy vampires I should say. That just makes them even more scary though. Another great chapter. I just might have to subscribe to this too.

So, I have just read the first chapter and I thought it was really good. The girls are now in the hands of Avenged. You all should be very afraid. Poor Mel, I hope she's alright.

This is awesome and it flows really well! Your description throughout is amazing and it really kept me interested... nice job!

Aww, Zack!! Come here, let mama give you a hug! Fucking hunters, how could they kill an unborn child in cold blood!

*puts detective hat on* something is seriously up with that "nurse" I don't think she's a nurse at all! I hope she's not drugging Matt or something equally evil!

The plot thickens! But at least they know now that the bitch is bad news!

More soon :D

about fucking time someone takes care of that bitch!!!! I can't wait for more :D

poor Zacky :( and damn it I hope she catches that damn nurse!!!!!!

Love "Nurse Rod Up Her Ass" - suits her to a tee lol.

Hmm, I wonder where Arin knows her from? I'm more and more convinced that's she after some kind of revenge.

Nurse rode up her ass, I love it!

Okay, freaky shit. So Arin knows the nurse? Curiouser and curiouser. I'm thinking that nurse has been planted into the house by someone out to get the boys, another hunter maybe?

More soon! I love this story :D

Oh shit

When the fuck Mel is gonna tell Shadows about that fucking nurse???? And I'm glad Arin is there :) I know he's gonna do everything to protect them specially Mel :)

Damn is this nurse a wannabe vampire hunter or something? Sounds like she's definitely drugging Matt but what for? I kinda have a feeling that she's related to an old slave of Zacky's. I hope they deal with the little bitch soon.

Awww they found Arin :-)

I'm feeling the love in this chapter!! Group hugs everyone! :D

What is that bitch doing to my Matty bear?! Set Vengeance on her please! XD

Awww they found Arin!! Yay! Matt's such a sweety pie! Can#t wait to see what happens next! I hope they deal with that bitch of a nurse quick smart!!

That bitch is drugging him!!!!! great timing Zacky and Johnny >=( someone needs to tell him about that 'nurse'!!!!!! and it was really sweet that Matt send them to find Arin :) and I'm glad they found him :)

I love Jimmy so much, he's such a sweetie pie!

Okay, this Snyder woman is getting on my nerves. What is she, some kind of reporter or something? She's so nosy >.<

Unless she wants to get in on the action... o.0 haha. Orr.. she knows them? So many questions! Haha

*swoons* oh Zacky.. you sweet little guy! Don't run away! Haha

More soon :D

I really wish that nurse would just go away, Zacky and Jess are so cute together.Cant wait to read more, update soon.