August 15th, 2010 at 06:37pm
I think you really developed Fawn’s personality and character as a vulnerable child who just wants everything to be right. Even in 100 words, I was able to get a sense of who she really is.
You did such an amazing job writing this!
though this was short in words, it went thousands of miles in meaning. You packed a ton of emotion into this and I simply adore it. I'm glad Fawn had a fantastic ending to a craptastic situation. :)
Really, I found this very well written and just. . .so. . amazing. Fantastic job, m'dear. <3