September 6th, 2011 at 07:30pm
Wow. Just...didn't expect that. I like all the little things you added about their past. That gave a very nice feel and detail to the one-shot. I thought you did very well. One-shots are hard to do...in my opinion.
Not very many grammar mistakes. I didn't see or noticed anything really. The idea was nice...would probably name a nice chapter-ed story....
I'm gonna say this, your lay out is dark and amazing. :) I love it.
And I love that song by Avril. :)
Sam and I had known each other since we were just pups
^That line made me go awww. :) It must be the word pups. <3
Aww, Alison must really care for Sam. And it's sad that she was waiting for him for such a long time. :) But she showed a lot of dedication though. She must really love him. I can sense all of Alison's and Sam's emotions, namely Alison's though.
Awwww. That's so sad! You brought tears ot my eyes, EverRose! >_< And yes, I'm a sap for romances, even if they have one person who had died. All the emotions in this entire story is beautiful and they come out strong. I like all the details you put into it as well. They were amazing beyond any words that I could even say.
Let's just say that I'm really stunned and in awe at your amazing writing prowess. And I think this is the longest comment that I have ever written for a one shot. X3
I love you and your amazing a** story. <3 Continue writing more lovely stories like this one. :)