November 14th, 2010 at 06:04pm
I liked it a lot.
You described everything really well and I certainly recognized the song in the story. Especially at the end.
I always like that people try to choose another story line than the obvious. It's surprising, and I like it.
I have a storyline up for every song I picked. I makes me happy that people choose something else. It's a very good thing.
You didn't have a lot of errors, which is great. You had enough words, you listened to every rule.
You did a great job! x
The story was lovable.