Whoa. Ohkay So How Do You Plan On Continuing The Story If Eve Hates Jack Now. I Mean Im Guessing That The Only Reason She Still Went To See Him Or Allowed Him Near Her, Was Because She Loved Jack. Will She Fall In Love With Him Again, Or Will He Find Other Ways To Be Close To Her? This Chapter Completely Blew My Mind Though, And Thats A Hard Thing To Do.
This is amazing! It's deep, and then its crazy, and then I just adore Eve for loving him, and I hate him for being like that, but geez, can you blame him? And chapter six?! Awesome. :)
The writing for this is so vivid. I can really tell what she's feeling. I really love the way you write ^.^ It's sort of disturbing... but in a good way :)