Floating Upon This Surface - Comments

AWW, love the story!:-D

Yay an update! Still loving this story!
And I'm glad she's with Sergio, Manuel sounds to clingy.

I like this story, seriously, you should continue.:)

Somehow, I feel so perverse in whether I want to accept the credibility of Sergio fathering a child... just because my own incessant beliefs have impeded me to remain stuck on the idea that Canales is a baby. But, low and behold, he isn't (which slightly ruptures the small cracks in my heart, I'm tellin' ya), and I kind of... like it. I think I'm the only one who feels a bit torn toward Cristina, right? Figures. I guess it's because of my ability to know the mask of the writer behind the story, and I know you have a way of humanizing the supposed antagonists and force me to levitate between sympathy and distaste.

Wait a minute, why am I the only one who seems to be analytical about it? I read far too much in between the lines that I kind of miss the enjoyment and mixture of drama and erratic fun to your fairy tales.

I sense this is going to be a twisted and cruel concoction of a story, but I wouldn't be surprised if I get this wrong. We talked about this already, but you know I love your writing... 'nuff said 'bout that. I don't know what direction you'll take it, because I know you'll end up surprising me with something I wasn't aware of. And, of course, as I said before, you only seem to be one of the few who generally surprises me. Love you! XO

Somehow, I feel so perverse in whether I want to accept the credibility of Sergio fathering a child... just because my own incessant beliefs have impeded me to remain stuck on the idea that Canales is a baby. But, low and behold, he isn't (which slightly ruptures the small cracks in my heart, I'm tellin' ya), and I kind of... like it. I think I'm the only one who feels a bit torn toward Cristina, right? Figures. I guess it's because of my ability to know the mask of the writer behind the story, and I know you have a way of humanizing the supposed antagonists and force me to levitate between sympathy and distaste.

Wait a minute, why am I the only one who seems to be analytical about it? I read far too much in between the lines that I kind of miss the enjoyment and mixture of drama and erratic fun to your fairy tales.

I sense this is going to be a twisted and cruel concoction of a story, but I wouldn't be surprised if I get this wrong. We talked about this already, but you know I love your writing... 'nuff said 'bout that. I don't know what direction you'll take it, because I know you'll end up surprising me with something I wasn't aware of. And, of course, as I said before, you only seem to be one of the few who generally surprises me. Love you! XO

Okay, I LOVE this story, I haven't seen many Canales stories out there, so yeah.
Just wondering, but this story is taking place when he is 25?

ay dios mio! It was wonderful as always!!! <333

ohhhmygoodness, you need to update this SOON PLEASE.
It's so good, and it has my bb ! :')
plz plz plz soon ? :D

KAKA! You can't leave me like that!!! I love that Sergio is hitting it off right away with Sophia and she's not holding any grief towards him!!!! And little Lucas!!! Ay dios! I just want to squeeze his cheeks!!!! Make shit happen woman! LOL <3

Wonderful, I don't hate it LOL I can't wait till you update again, I'm so glad school isn't stopping you from updating! <3

mujer why do you do this to meee? write more, naooooo! LOL. dude, christina is a straight up bitch. bahaha and sergio needs to get with sophiaaa! more more more!

You left it on a cliffhanger?!?!?! I can't believe you!!! DIOS! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!?! Either way, I'm glad you got Sophia and Sergio to bump into each other in this chapter...can't wait to see what happens from here!!!! <3 te amo nena!

ahhhhhh finally, i found a sergio canales story:)))
loving it <3

i'll start whoring out this story for you, mi amor <333

eeeeekk! i can't wait to read about sergio being back in his hometown. omg, i love this story so much!

YES!!!!! It was awesome!!!!! I can't wait for him to find out about Lucas!!!!! this...is exciting!!!! :D

OMK! I AM SO GLAD I CHECKED MY EMAIL AND SAW A STORY NOTIFICATION!

i totes agree with maral. i needs the third installment! <3

OMK CHAPTER THREE NNNAAAOOOO!!!! LOL

Fantastic story! And you never really see any Canales het stories, which is a pity, because isn't he easy on the eyes!

AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

OMG I LOVE THISSSSSSS!!!!
I can't wait to see how this all plays out nena!!!
I love you ladyface!!!!!!!! te amo mucho mi querido ;) <33333

aldsfjalewsdfljdsfale;;

holy hell, leticia that was so well written and i loved all of it. subscribing f'sho.
i think i like dirty sergio more than i like innocent sergio. yummm! if only...
eeek! i can't wait for the next chapter, te amo mi amor <3