Tight Denim - Comments

Okay, seriously? This is perfect. I love the simplicity of the point of the story. Kudos to writing about a boy getting an erection.

I love the layout by the way. Not too bright, and somewhat soft. I noticed no errors, and I'm really curious as to what inspired this? Haha.

boys getting erections kind of gets me all hot and bothered.

Great short story, and it has been recommended!

I wouldn't have ever thought that I'd enjoy a story written about a boner but oh my gosh. I found this hilarious. The flow of the overall drabble was to die for and I don't think I could fix anything about this piece because personally it gets your attention with excellent detail and it honestly made me wonder if this is how some guys see us girls when we do wear these kinds of bottoms. I think what got me attracted to this the most was because this boy literally got an erection over something so small and in the middle of class at that. Definitely a wonder piece.

Totally didn't see that coming, but I loved it anyway! Your descriptions were flawless. Nicely done!

Interesting.

In a good way. Now I'm wondering if that's what boys think when I wear my denim shorts. Whoa. Interesting thought. :P

But yeah, it was incredible. Really.

At first,I was wondering what's so special about a pair of shorts and then I was like ooooh lol
I love it,the descriptions in this was amazing

I notice the slightly faded section in the thight area that is obvious next to the rest of the indigo fabric.
I think you meant to say thigh.

I really, really enjoyed this. It was so descriptive and wonderful!
I've never actually read about a guy getting an erection, so this was kind of funny to read.
:) I loved it.

Cool story, bro. XD

No, it was well written. Beautiful description. MMM I hope the boy was hot. XD [/not something to say in a story about an erection. Why? I dunno.]

xD I really enjoyed this. I have to admit that I did not see that coming. As different as it was, it was very well written. I did notice you spelt “member”, “memeber” at one point, though.

The description and detail in this was phenomenal. I really enjoyed the first paragraph. It was all so clear and I had to wonder what was going on. Also, it made me giggle a bit. I’m impressed you got this story out of that picture xD Though you did a good job with the idea. The description was great, the emotion was real, and the reaction at the end with the notebook was embarrassing for him and hilarious for me at the same time, so excellent job!

“Once an individual drop of sweat finishes persperizing from my pores, they slowly slide down my face, leaving a salty moist trail behind that will soon evaporate.” That line is just so descriptive, I feel like I’m actually sweating! I love it!!

Your details and specific descriptions of emotions are outstanding!
The ending made me embarrassed for the boy, which is good for you as the writer.

You’re really and incredible author; don’t ever forget it!

This is def. not something I'd usually read.
It was like, "naughty boy," teehee. (:

I really like your attention to detail. You made sweating sound slighty cool. :D
But on a more serious note; I really did like this story. It was short, nicely
detailed and was just a nice little read. : ) The layout was adorable and I really
liked how most of the story deets seemed to blend with the picture.

Nice Job. :)

At first I was confused...then I started to get it when he talked about her fingertips touching her shorts. XD
But anyways this was really good lol I liked how the picture inspired you XD

Okay, this was actually sort of epic in a weird way, especially considering all she did was giggle.
My arse would've been like 'peace' and ran for the freaking hills.

Strange, but I sorta liked it. At first I was wondering why the character was freaking out this much over a pair of shorts, but then I was like "Oooooh, he just has the hots for some girl!" ;) haha. I liked it.