I Have a Secret - Comments

It honestly sorta bored me until the end, after the battle. Then that was good. And I didn't see any grammer mistakes or anything, so that was good. I really like your pictures and layout. i also like, how you started off with 'I have a secret' and went into "it died wiht me'. I think it was a good story. Maybe I just have a short attention span... Sorry

I really loved this ending though it was sad.

This is incredible! I love how you had Theo involved in the series as though she could have easily been one of J.K. Rowling's characters. It was also really unique the way you made her want to be in Slytherin and follow Voldemort even though she was in Ravenclaw. I loved it! You are a great writer. :D

I loved it, the ending was superb!

I loved it!
I love the fact that it didn't end happy, it's nice to have a change. :D

I LOVED IT! :D It was amazing, it was so describtive(sp)!
The banner was awesome and so was the layout! :)
It was very good. :)

Oh wow. This didn't end how I expected AT ALL.
But what an amazing one-shot!
It was so original...loved the 'Wands and Roses' bit lol.
Good luck!

Ahh, the ending was really depressing. I don't think I was ready for that, but it was AMAZING. I loved it so freakin` much.

I loved it from beginning to end, the fact that she was the only one of her family not to be in Slytherin, and how the only House she didn't bad mouth was the one she ended up getting into. I completely agree with petite chaton; best line in the whole story was: "Professor ‘I have a stick up my arse’ McGonagall cleared her throat." Epic, just epic and I did laugh.

This makes me want to go back and write some more Harry Potter fanfiction, which I rarely write as it is, so you did an excellent job.

PS. Ron is love.

I like it.XD

Okay, I have to say that I loved this! It was well written, amazingly worded and really original. I liked the recurrance of 'I have a secret'- especially at the end. It was very powerful and stood out in my mind. That is definetly talent.

I loved how you described her feelings for Ron, they seemed to realistic and believable, I could really feel what she was feeling and the ending just fit perfectly. It was really sad, but at the same time it felt not happy, but almost bittersweet, if you know what I mean. She died, but she'd done the right thing, and it was written perfectly.

I think my favourite line had to be "Professor ‘I have a stick up my arse’ McGonagall cleared her throat" - seriously, that line is so true and made me laugh for about five minutes.

This was just incredible, and as I've said, amazingly written.

cool story. sorry it ended like that but it was still good.