Be Mine - Comments

This story is amazing and i need to read more. Please update.

Also sorry about the name spellings changing. Goggle docs auto corrects Brook as Brooke (Probably the actual spelling, but not my character so suck it Google!) and I'm still not sure which spelling of Calcifer I like best. It could be Calsafer Calsefer Calsifer but right now I'm digging Calcifer because of all the C's which is my favorite letter. If you can guess why you get a virtual cookie ^_~

100 readers on my first chapter? Time to do the happy dance *Bring it around town. Bring! It! A-round town!*

I think that this is such an unassuming and endearing story. At first I wasn't expecting much, but to my delight this story was much more than it had seemed in the beginning. I feel that your characters are very realistic (well as far as characters in a fantasy can be), and I really appreciate how your characters are flawed, because that makes them more human. This is such a great story and it's a shame that more people haven't read it yet. I hope they do.

I'm another comment swap person, I started this and so far I'm enjoying it! Your writing isn't as detailed as I usually like, but still it gets to the point and sets the scene pretty well. The characters clearly shine through with their actions, and are developing quite nicely so far, although I would like a better ratio between talking and actions, personally, that's just my opinion. I also love that Brook is bisexual, since I don't see many characters on Mibba that are LGBT apart from the usual slash fic staples. I look forward to reading more and hopefully you will post another chapter soon!

Well, I'm a comment swap person, and I have to admit that I hadn't planned on reading your whole story. I was just going to read the first few chapters and leave you a comment, but after I got started I couldn't stop. So, that I think is the best comment I can give you. Your story is interesting and original, and I'm finding all of your characters to be likable. Even Calsafer, in his rather dark and unlikable way. Your writing is good and you seem to have a good feel for the structure and how to keep the reader's interest. I am really interested in seeing where you take this story and I will definitely be back for more. I hope you get more loyal readers soon, because I know how motivating that can be and I really want to see more chapters. Yep. I'm completely selfish like that. Anyway, keep up the good work! I promise to leave you another comment on your next chapter.

First comment! Awesome but sad with such a cool story.

I am seriously in love with this. I just read it all an wished there was more. The writing is good and the story is so suspenseful! I just kinda hope it doesn't end with everyone dead!

Please update this soon! I want to read more!