Falling For My Best Friend's Sister - Comments

i'm hooked on this story :D i havent finished it yet , but it's amazing ! i love the way you put so much description into all the characters and develop their personalities so well ! what i found is that sometimes it gets a litle jumbled, and i dont know who theyre talking about, so maybe you could work on that? but other than that one minor problem, this story is AMAZING ! its one of the best you've written ! definitely finishing this up sometime soon & subscribing <3

Oh My God, you've finally updated it!! YESSS!!

If you don't work on it i will just have to stop reading it!!! GRRR!!!

grrr. everytime something good happens between Sam and Lucky, there's Jason to mess it up! You should put me in the story so I can kill him myself. ;)

What's she going to do?! Please don't let it be anything drastic like trying to kill herself!

Ok Lucky is stupid. Just putting that out there. Just because Sam 'cheated' on her does not mean she can do the same! it's just going to cause problems! Ugh. Anyways, great chapter, loved it!

NOOO! Don't end it yet! There could be so much more to this story! I figure you have at least ten more chapters to write, give or take a little. Maybe you don't need to write that many more, but please don't end it with 1-2 chapters left! However you probably won't listen to me, so I'm going to say this, if you do end it in 1-2 chapters, then you have to make a sequel! This story is just too amazing! Please take this into consideration. =D

Just read it, it's really good, so PLEASE update and SOON! lol. :)

its amazing

Number one, when writing a story, you want to make the reader want to know more. So your title shouldn't give away the plot. Instead of 'Falling for My Best Friend's Sister' try a title that adds a little mystery like 'Falling for the Wrong One' or the 'The Wrong Girl' or even 'My Best Friend's Sister'

Number two, the links in the story summary shouldn't be there. If you want to do links, you can only do them in the author's note. There's also a character page you can use.

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Hi hi... I haven't read it yet, but I wanted to say... There is a character page for you to upload the pics on, if you check like my story, you'll see a link next to comments and whatnot that says characters. If you go to "my mibba" it'll be on the right side, under the Stories category... :) Hope that helped.

:'( oh hell no she's gonna kill herself.

When is Sam going to not get lucky and what's her faces name wprnfe or mixed up cause I want em together asap