BABY - Comments

Thank you both for the feedback. I really appreciate it. It felt good to put this up and let some things off of my chest.

Sometimes I'm not really confident with my writing, which is why I thought that this was horrendous lol, but your comments really helped (:

Wow, this was very powerful. I completely know how you feel, I too have been though a relationship like that. It was a horrid feeling. I like the way you put it into words though.

*smile* Brielle.

It’s not horrendous. It’s everything a brilliant piece of writing is – brutally honest, full of emotion, and well put together. You did a really good job with this, so don’t think it’s bad. Although I don’t know the full story, I got enough of it from your writing to fee empathy for what’s happened. I really enjoyed this. It was short and sweet, yet packed full of emotion. Though it was short, it also told a story, and I like things like this. They’re almost liberating, and it’s refreshing to be able to put something so personal out there. It’s a very brace thing to do and you should be proud of yourself, so great job! =D