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  • florence

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    I like the emotion in this, and how I can relate to it, even though I had no idea who this character was.
    That is a really special skill! I'm not kidding, dude, it is really amazing that you could do that here.

    For such a short length, I felt myself feeling satisfied as well as curious for more.
    And I also like how you introduce the character at the end. It adds a unique touch.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 12:36am
  • Atsushi Sakurai.

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    I can understand and relate to this a little. Sometimes I feel that whenever I write or draw it would never be appreciated...
    September 6th, 2010 at 07:09am
  • Patty Lovell

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    I loved this, honestly. Everything fit, even how short it was. It didn't need to be long in order to describe everything or say everything.
    It just did.

    Pata, that's close to my [real] name, which is Patty X]

    You are a fantasctic writer and I think you could go places with that mind of yours. ^_^
    August 17th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • Aim Your Arrows High

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    I agree with Bittersweet Kiss, I love how you end each writing with those lines. I loved the line My talent is buried underneath the faces of the beautiful. Very well expressed. Great job! I'm by far going to read the rest of these.
    August 17th, 2010 at 09:45pm
  • wicked ways

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    I love this :3
    Your writing is magnificant! (sp? xD)
    It's so short but yet so awesome.
    Really well done <3
    August 17th, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • paranoid android.

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    This is a really nice idea.
    It gives me so much inspiration.
    "My talent is buried underneath the faces of the beautiful." <3
    There are so magnificent lines in there, very poetic.
    August 17th, 2010 at 09:30pm
  • fat lamb

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    I love how you end these. "My name is ____, and I _________."
    I really like these X drabbles. On to X: Dead!
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:42pm