X: Dead - Comments

I really like this.
You have a unique writing style.
And I love hide, even though he's dead.

^^

i really like this layout, and the banner picture
wow, this is realy deep
and kind of sad, how people can get so caught up,
in things like drugs and sex, to make you die
thats pretty sad :[ is he supposed to be like a rockstar?
cuz it mentioned a guitar.

THIS IS DEEP.

And I absolutely love that.
Your writing confunds me and confuses me, in a great way.
You have such a talent for drabbles. You should write more of them.

<3

This is one of my favorites to the series. Short, but enjoyable.

I liked how the summary and the chapter flowed extremely well with each other.
Of course, I like to think that once you're dead, you become nothing. You explained that very well, how everything he seem to do affected him and he knew it, worst of all, he knew it and yet he didn't find the strength to stop himself. That's so human of someone to do; there will always be this emptiness inside us. You depicted that in this particular drabble and in the last 3.

The God of Death hovered over me, begging me to join him.
I loved this certain bit. I think he is struggling with his own death. He sees that he's dead, he understands it but there's a part of him that will never blame himself for it. His addictions were taken too far and he eventually died. It's really sad.

This was short, easy to read and it clearly showed me what it was about. You did a good job at describing his weaknesses and such. Nicely done. :D

I really liked this. I liked the description, I liked how short it was and yet said so much, I liked Hides name, I loved the last sentence.

My name is hide, and I am dead

Jesus, all of your drabbles are amazing. I really liked that part when you wrote The high of it all seduced me into it's grasp, threatening to never let me go.

I really hope you continue to write these.

My craves and addictions were deadly from the beginning. The riffs of the guitar, the soft liquid of alcohol, the clouded smoke of a cigarette, and the climax of a night in bed were all the right ingredients for a deadly drug and I wanted it all.

That line was just so perfect.
Your writing is amazing. You should tell me the next time you write any drabbles, yes?