ahahaha, god, that was fun
July 25th, 2011 at 08:01am
Unicorn Porn - Comments
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You Sir (Madame?) are Rawrsome!July 19th, 2011 at 05:49pm
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You Sir (Madame?) are Rawrsome!July 19th, 2011 at 05:49pm
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Fucking genius.August 29th, 2010 at 11:06pm
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The title for this is just pure win. XD I love this story, I might read it over and over again. xD It made me laugh so hard but it was so sweet and cute. Great job.<3 (:August 19th, 2010 at 07:52pm
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You are so silly!!
"“I told you to stop watching that unicorn porn,” Frank said impatiently and with a sigh. “It’s no good for you. Unicorns shouldn’t ejaculate rainbows and sparkles.”
“For the last time Frank, how many times have I told you? They cum cupcakes. Duh!”"
Those lines made me laugh pretty hard xDAugust 17th, 2010 at 08:25pm -
Love this story!!August 17th, 2010 at 07:59pm
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So, I'll be writing this while I read, alright? (I have the story open in another tab because I am a ninja)
Mikey was use to this now, I'm not sure if this is an error or not. Shouldn't it be "used to"? I'm honestly not sure.
Every second went by slower and slower and Mikey was on the verge of having a small panic attack. If only he knew where his older inhaler was…. That part was cute :3
Although, I must ask, why do people insist on writing him with asthma, when he doesn't have it? I honestly don't care, it's fanfiction after all, I'm just curious :)
“It’s no good for you. Unicorns shouldn’t ejaculate rainbows and sparkles.”
“For the last time Frank, how many times have I told you? They cum cupcakes. Duh!”
“Freak.”
“You mean best friend,”
Up to this point, I thought the funniest thing had been the title. You destroyed that conception. I love this part! <3
I'm not surprised that Frank isn't surprised, Mikey does kinda scream 'gay' sometimes...especially if you see some of his old high school photos...
"...you that following asleep..." do you mean 'falling'?
“Good. Now get your skinny little ass over here and let’s watch some of that unicorn porn!”
Is that just a thing you've made up between the two of them, as sort of an inside-random-joke, or is it a legit thing? I don't know whether I want it to be real or not O.o...
Well, this was very cute.
The dialogue was believable and the grammar and spelling were error-free, save those two possible word choice things I pointed out, the second one being the only one I'm honestly sure about. The way they talked to each other was cute and realistic, and your descriptions were incredible.
Thank you very much for entering my contest :DAugust 17th, 2010 at 10:59am
