Telephone - Comments

This was really, really sweet. I enjoyed it immensely. Good job!

Omg. Just no. :>

So confused as to why this keeps coming up on the 'new stories' page when it's only a one-shot and there's no update. :S

How cute, and very real(:
Easily related to multiple other people. This was very good(;

Owh, adorable! :3

I love your writing style, baby sis ;)
really cute :D
I give you 10/10 for this one :))

i loved the ending of the first chapter. but then the second chapter was deleted? :( didnt get to read it. update soon

I've been waiting for something like this...

<3

adorable. (:

This is such a cute story. :)
Amazing job.

woooooooooooow. i looove this! i normally don't like repeated images in the background like this, but for some reason, it really works with your story <3 idk why! but the colors work really well with one another.

but i love the way your writing makes the reader go "aww" i mean, i totally just did and my cousin looked at me like i was crazy. but i sooo love this!

awww!!!! what she said to him reminds me of something i wish i could tell to this one guy!

as much as this would be a pretty sweet story, i think it should stay a one-shot.

lovely job dear [:

You should update again.
You could make a good story out of this, even if it's just talking about your life.
If you don't feel like you want to, though, don't do it.
If you're not into it, it'll show.

Cute. :)

Cute. :)

AW! I really hope this actually happened! Great story!

screw you Croix. got nothin else to say eh?
LOL

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...nice,you got her GOOD!!
nice storyXD

very cute. I wish things like that would happen to me :)

Awh! The ending was so cute!