Stuck in the Moment - Comments

I, neither, am a big fan of the Biebs. Do I randomly dance along to his when they play on the radio? Yes. When I'm alone. But that's beside the point.

I am, however, a plan of your story, and the way you wrote it out. I could tell you planned it out, and I liked how the theme of the story matched the theme of your song. I love your layout. You definately get props for that. I do think you could have done alot more if the story had been a bit longer, maybe expanded on the idea so we could SEE just how far their relationship goes back. Grammar was excellent for me.

I agree with my co-judge. Sparkletastic :D

Thanks for entering this in the contest, first off! I really enjoyed reading it!

Now, I'm not a fan of the Bieb at all, but this story I liked. The concept of wanting to get this big secret off your chest and having everything work out is such a beloved storyline that it could be cliche, but not the way you wrote it!

Other than a few run-on-ish sentences, I think this is exceptionally well edited with some of the best grammar I've seen on a one shot on here!

Sparkletastic job!

Beiber isn't my cup of tea, and I admit I've only ever listened to one or two of his songs, but this story was so sweet and cute! It almost makes me want to listen to him, ... almost. Haha!

Anyway I did catch this: yeah we talked to each others for hours on end
It should be other right? Just thought you should know.

I thought this was pretty freakin' adorable though, and it was nice reading a story from a guy's POV. I don't read many like this.

I'm not much of a Bieber fan, but this was adorable. I liked it, it was lovely.

Not something I'd normally read because of JB but it was quite good.
I liked it, well done. <3

I've already commented on it xD
but, when I re-read it, I found it much more cuter and adorable.
Keep up the amazing work :D

When I say this, I thought, Oh, lovely. Another JB fanfic. Oy. But it completely blew away my expectations. It's really adorable, sweet, and simple.
Lovely job! <3

Aw this is sweet! I love the banner, especially the font on it. In the beginning of the story I was positive that they were gonna get together but then it seemed that you were throwing me a curve ball, luckily I was wrong. I think the fact that you made the happy ending a little bit sly made me appreciate it more since it wasn’t so obvious and straight forward. Happy endings are nice and I think you went about that nicely. My only problem with this was the random italics, kinda threw me off but otherwise nice job.

i'm not big on justin...... but this was absolutely cute and adorable :3

I thought the layout and title were cute, thought the banner was a bit blurry.

I found a couple things that made the flow you had going on a bit choppy. Just a few words that seemed awkward. Other than that it seemed good.

I've never heard this song, not a big fan of JB, but from the sound of it, it is a cute song to do a songfic about.

I really don't like when people italicize or bold the words to the song. I feel like it makes the story awkward. That being said, I like where you used the lyrics. Aha

Overall, good job. I liked it (:

This was really adorable, and although I must say, I really have distaste for Justin Bieber, this was the complete opposite...

Keep it up!

I must say I absolutely despise this..., song. I loveeee the story though!!!! It's so cutee!

First off: "We didn't care if we got wet". Now I feel totally immature. I should've checked the rating first XD

Second Off: Maggie Moo is the best ice cream place evahhhh...

Third off: It was so adorable and I'm glad I read it even though I don't really loooooooooooove Justin Bieber. It was uber uber cute.

Haha, this was cute.
Good job hon. C:

I never heard of the song...seeing as I don't listen to jb but I love this story :D
It seemed so realistic and everything was very sweet :3
Maggie Moo...such an adorable nickname X3

I like the layout and the banner is okay. I love the layout because it's very bright and inviting. The banner is somewhat blurry, but I do like that the story title is on it.

Stuck In The Moment just also happens to be one of my favorite songs by Justin. So this is cool.

Ah, being best friends for a boy and a girl is often difficult. I think deep down, there is always a deep feeling between both of them, because obviosuly they already have a deep connection and bond.

Aww, that's such a cute nickname. :3

Wow! I love the fact that guy is the one that is getting upset, emotional, and frustrated over the lack of romance between them. He must care a lot about Maggie.
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Overall, this was a fairly light and easy read.It was very cute too. I'm usually not a fan of song lyrics playing just a huge part in stories, but this one was okay. I also think that you need to fix the spacing in the last paragraph. Other than that, good job! I really enjoyed this sweet read.

Aww that's cute
Maggie Moo, I like that nickname. Very realistic, I could picture the scene clearly in my head.

HE GOT HER TO ACCEPT THEIR LOVE. <3
This was so absolutely adorable.
It was just . . . Aw. <3
The characters were very believable, too. (;
YAY.

At first I was wondering why some of the dialogue was italicized, but then I realized it must be a song fic of the sort. This story made me sad, but only because I was recently dumped and this reminds me of him. Other than that, you wrote the story very nicely. :)

By the way, how did you get someone else to make your story layout???

I liked this. Good job.