Hmmm, I really enjoyed reading this. At first, you had me confused as to where the perfection of it all was because you were showing how aweful her life was. All I saw were her flaws and the flaws of everyone around her. If I read that the way you meant to portray it, I like the way you put perfection into not only her but everyone and everything. I also really liked the way you didn't just blatantly put the perfection you were describing into the story.
As for what I was imagining, you got it. I was just looking for another person's perspective on what perfection really is. And I did enjoy reading your view on it, and the story you told to show it.
I did see a typo or two, if you'd read through it and correct whatever you see, then that'd be great. (: Thank you for your submission.
Ugh, this seems so impersonal and serious. I really did think it was great, even though this comment seems a little generic. I was smiling by the end. (:
As for what I was imagining, you got it. I was just looking for another person's perspective on what perfection really is. And I did enjoy reading your view on it, and the story you told to show it.
I did see a typo or two, if you'd read through it and correct whatever you see, then that'd be great. (: Thank you for your submission.
Ugh, this seems so impersonal and serious. I really did think it was great, even though this comment seems a little generic. I was smiling by the end. (: