December 5th, 2010 at 11:09pm
first off, love the layout! and the picture :]
really good summary! i like it
you used 13,yeahh baby thirteen! woo! xD
Poor Jasey sounds like a well, loner
my only question: whyd they move?
haha i liked how you explained their new house haha
i would love for one with my own bathroom! cmon thatd b cool!
yay she met the boys! and hah the skunk one is obviously jack xD
i seriously laughed when jack was introducing them !! that was funny
shes going to zack's school :]
yay they're going out! yeahhh!
aww how she explains him is adorable! aww! haha
wow, thats kinda douchey on zack's part,
just cuz she wont have sex with him? ughh guys
okay, hes adorable :] he actually goes to her house and apologizes
Jasey, say you mean it :] you're dressed to kill :]
dont waste your time on me :] wathe said to her
i would kill someone for a guy to say that to me... xD
gambling with desire :] ahh i love how you got lyrics in there!
my words are as timed as the beating in my chest :]
aww Zack is so freaking sweet to her! ahh!
that was really really good!! :D
the only thing id say is that there are like 2 spelling errors
which doesnt bother me, but if i had critique
thatd be it. it honeslty was AMAZING!
I'm utterly speechless at how great this story is, words can't even describe it.
Plus, I love the picture(: