What life gives you - Comments

*raises hand* i think you should keep! I love it already! Just like how I started to like skittles! after the first few I got hooked!

LOVEEEEEEEEEE

i loovveee it can't wait moree..and sorry about your friend, i know what that feels like =/

Good job update soon please.

She's gonna kick them out. >.<
They can move in with his boyfriend and they can be kind of a happy little family.=D
I like your story a lot so far.<3

hey so that chapter was good but you have a paragraph thats repeated twice. the 'And what's that? Would you like to kill someone else in my family' to the 'Atleast and I andshe agree on something; we both hate Jesse Hones.' you wrote that paragraph twice. Other than that I like this chapter but I'm confused about his ex' name. is it Cayden or Camden? because earlier in the chapter I think you had put Cayden then I saw Camden unless I'm seeing things... and his mom sounds like a bitch.

Wow, the preface was full of hate. I find it odd that someone who's suicidal has an appreciation for the Earth. Yes, people who are suicidal have a tendency to find comfort in things that most people wouldn't think about but I don't think I've heard of the Earth being one of them. But that's the psychologist in me talking, so we'll ignore that.

"Stuff a pack of cigarettes in the back of my black skinny jeans and putting my chucks on I opened the door to see my mother waiting; tapping her foot furiously."
I think it's supposed to be "stuffing" and there should be a comma after "...putting my chucks on..." (before the part that reads "...I opened the door...")
I don't know if there were any other commas that were needed because I wasn't paying much attention to grammar. That was just a sentence that stood out to me.

This is really cute though... and sad... but still cute. You should continue it, for sure.

I'm interested. this seems good so far lol.

woot 1st! ok this sounds interesting....
must know wht happens....8)