Distant Flowers - Comments

when your'll updating?

hey i do like the new version..but why don't you try make their point of views a little longer? And let masqurade give us i little more information to wet the taste buds. but i do like it. also it seems a bit weird for willow to just accept the situation i would expect her to be a bit more freaked out but then again maybe i'm reading her personality wrong. but all and all i really like it keep on keeping on.
i hope you kno that i don't mean any offence i really like were the story is going...o i forgot to ask what genre is it?

I really really liked it!!! :D

hey the story is good but yess it is a bit to rushed..but i like it..please post soon

I like the layout you had for the story, and I liked the idea of the story itself. It just sounded to me maybe a little too rushed or lacking some detail a bit, but I enjoyed reading it. :)