I'm not sure if you are still writing this story but I hope you are. I'm curious where you plan on going with the whole story and I agree Jake and Aai should have started like Echo and Rose.
Oh interesting!! I ca't wait to find out what happens when Rose realizes whats happening!! Also, about when they find out she's not from their planet? but wait is Ali one of her kind??
AHHH you gotta update.... i feel horrible cause i just realized you had a sequel out.... but now that i read it, i need more!!! plus i'm super excited for the femmeslash!!! there aren't that many good ones out there, so i'm trusting that you will give it justice! update soon!
excited for this story! never read anything involving aliens but im sure your writing can keep me interested :D i wonder if jake is the one who attacked? please update as soon as you can! cant wait!!
I can't wait for the next chapter:) i love the idea of this story. I never read about an alien before and i know you can definitaly spark my interest in it. I hope you update soon, Alaivera was such an interesting character and i cant wait to see if Echoxia would be wicked awesome aswell ;)