June 20th, 2011 at 01:13am
Chapters 1-4
Ok, so her parents really were cowards for not fessing up with her sooner. I'm sure if they had told her the truth, although angry it would have been an easier blow to deal with. But sometimes, like Maria said people wants something so much they don't think about it.
That being said...wow she's got a lot to deal with after the visit to her mom's. I'd have punched Zacky a little harder. But het that's just me, I love torturing that guy for some reason.
The comradory between the guys is amazing. She really fits right in, so I can see this going to great places when I get deeper into it. That being said I shall return to this when I get up from my nap which is like now. *licks your face*
I loved this, the way you developed Anna's relationships with everyone in the story was a joy to read. I love having that introspective look into others lives as they get to know one another. The fact she and Brian took things slow, loved that too, you let them find true feelings for one another and then act upon it. The whole Glen thing, I knew when that fucker showed up there would be issues, and I was right. Some men, I wish I could say I'm sorry he died, but I'm not. You did have me scared for Anna though, but thankfully you didn't make me wait forever but then again the story was complete so I didn't have to.
And the move to HB was perfect. Anna now has a reall home and family close to her and that made me happy. I would say more but there appears to be a sequel I need to catch up on so that's where I'm heading now. *licks your face*