Break Down The Walls - Comments

  • I was laughing so hard that she missed the ball when she tried to kick it. Finally an OC who sucks at at soccer. Usually the girl is good at soccer or if she never played discovers she has a natural talent for it. I would have done the same thing. That actually happened to me when I played soccer lol. Your story is so amazing and I hope you keep updating. ^^
    August 22nd, 2010 at 01:56am
  • “I hope someone cuts all your hair off in the middle of the night.”
    OMFG. I laughed so hard. Seriously, she's that bad at football? And the rock paper scissors thing- lololol.
    I love this.
    But on a more serious note; I hope no one cuts off his hair D:
    It's so long and silky and luscious.
    Although, he currently sports the hairstyle of a little girl, but still. Long, silky beaticious strands ftw!
    Thanks for the shout out! ♥
    August 22nd, 2010 at 12:49am
  • Gahhhhhhhhhhh more people need to comment! i want more chapters! :)
    August 21st, 2010 at 01:44am
  • I just found your story and I already love it. Cant wait for the next one.
    August 21st, 2010 at 01:42am
  • Hey I found your story and I love it! The second chapter was so funny: especially when she meets the guys!!!!!!!!!1! I was laughing so hard i had to read it again just to laugh some more! Your writing is awesome and i cant wait to see what will happen...hopefully Emilio will die so that Sophie can cry her way into Nandos arms... :)
    August 20th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • Time for some Nando charm! I dislike Emilio already!
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • I like this story, i'll be reading itin the future!:-D
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • I have a plan; it's called kill Emilio.
    We take Emilio, strap him to the roof of a car, and drive said car off the face of a cliff.
    That woman seriously needs to leave him.
    And lol, she threated her back!
    August 20th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • “Xabi you are stupid." OMFG tears are on my eyes.
    THATS OKAY XABI BB YOU ARE STILL CLASSY.
    Seriously, Del Bosque is my new role model. He sure is a funny little man :P
    Hey calls them kids XD
    Dude, they all went FABIO FROM THOSE STUPID ROMANCE BOOKS ON HER.
    It was spectacular.
    New best friend? FUCK YES.
    August 20th, 2010 at 07:36am
  • Oh I love it. You are a wonderful writerr♥'
    I'm gonna predict whats in her office. Okay, ready? San Iker, naked and holding a basket of muffins sprawled out across her desk. And there are candles lighting the background as Mary takes off her fake breasts and reveals Fernando Torres in all his blonde headed, pink lipped glory. Am I right?
    Okay, no. I just like...told you my fantasy- I actually think that one- or all- footballer will be there, for something press-related. :)
    Do you think you're gonna add a characters' section?
    I love this story already- my only issue is sort of just me being nit-picky, but the sport is actually called football :S
    And although America is...American, and doesn't call it that, since this story is based in Spain- or at least I'm pretty sure it is?- they would call it football, as thats what they call it in Spain. Just saying :)
    Thanks for the shout out, btw!
    Lovee thisss!
    August 20th, 2010 at 12:53am