Twenty-One and Invincible - Comments

I totally love this story. And a fight in the stands, that was funny. And a party? oooh. loved it. Can't wait for the next chapters!!!

I wish my subscriptions page would tell me when this was updated
because I love this story so much!
And I loved all the updates that I missed! Gabie cracks me up.
I cannot wait for the next installment!

so sorry i havent commented for the last 3 chapters!
school keeping me busy as always.
WOOOOOO GABIE. <3

I feel so bad for her, everyone seems to embarrass her. I want to see Patrick's reaction :D

Oh wow. Can't wait to hear what Patrick says about this!

Great chapter and Gabie getting into a fight with that fan ... loved it. Now we needs Patrick to visit Carmen!!

This is great :)
Gabie is awesome <3

Go Gabie! :D
'bout to knock a bitch out. Heh.
This story (along with all of your other stories) is phenomenal!
I also really like her Grandpa.

looooooooooooooooooooove!!
Gabie FTW. :)

Holy crap, Gabie!

Did Patrick see? :O

lmao!!!
that is so funny!
if i was gabie i would've done the same.

Just read all six chapters and I must say, I loved everyone of them.

Gabie is my new hero, and Carmen's grandfather is the cutest thing. I'm hooked.

Great job honey. love it

:D
catfight!
lol i wonder how pat is gonna tease her now! xD

This is my favorite chapter so far.

Loved it!! Can't wait to find out pats reaction to the fight that happened!

The Grandma must be one of the most embarrassing people on earth - I loveeee her! ;D
I can't wait for when she finally does go to the arena!

I love the Grandpa in this story!
He's so sweet!
Loved the update!

loved the update : )

Really loving where this is going can't wait for them to start a relationship together but i think the problems her grandpa is having with the coughing and stuff makes me think that something is going to happen to him and she is going to need Patrick to lean on and help her through it but hopefully not death.
Update soon please!!
Really really love this :D