Twenty-One and Invincible - Comments

Girl. I realize that you finished this story a while ago, but it was too good not to comment on. You, my friend, have the gift. That was beautiful. Amazing. Awesome. Inspiring. Wonderful. The second to last chapter was truly incredible. So many times people try and write those moments, but they end up falling short. Yours was everything it needed to be and more.

Aww! This was so sweet.

That was an amazing end to the story. I know how she felt during those times. I went through the same thing with my grandfather about a year ago. So I feel her pain. I loved it

I really loved this story.
Pat and Carmen were so cute together!
I can't wait for your next one :)

wow, tht was one a-maze-ing story:)

There is only one thing that I hate about your stories, and that's when they end. :(
I really liked this one though even though it made me cry. :)

awww i think this was a great endidng!
i loved this story so much!!

GREAT story. Like, I'm pretty much in love with this story.
Sorta sad that it's over now. Ahaha,

Sad this story came to an end so fast =(

what a sad ending! but it was so well done.
great work on another wonderful story!!

Can you say sob fest??
My roommate looked at me funny as I was crying to this...
Well done!

OMG! I balled my eyes out crying in this chapter. It was so good and so sad!

D:
this was the sades chapter ever!!!
i wanna cry so bad!!

I've never read a story where it actually made me cry. I loved the last chapter, even though it was so sad. Keep up the good work! (:

That was so sad!
I was nearly in tears when Grandpa was talking!

Well.. :(

i love this story!! so sad, made me cry a little :(

=*( He's in a better place. Keep it up, can't wait for the end.(though I don't want to see it come so soonly lol)

im crying:( well i was about to. that man grew on me, lol. that was really sad tho:( im close to me grandparents so tht was all i was thinking of. but anyways, that was rlly good!!! and im kinda sad your ending it. will you make a sequel?

that was seriously amazing.
great job capturing the emotions going on with someones last words like that..
update soon :)