Twenty-One and Invincible - Comments

I Love this. Great update honey

Love this!!!!! Can't wait to see how things will progress between these two. :P

Haha, her fake word document made me laugh.
I love how Patrick and Carmen interact.
Loved the update! :)

Love the update honey. Great job honey

I loved it!
I'm really excited to see developments between Patrick and Carmen!
Good job ;)

Sigh. Thursday? Or Friday? Liv, you're driving me nuts.

Hahaha kidding!
This is just gonna be so good !!

ohhh I wonder what's going to happen next!! :D
update soon!

this update probably couldn't have come at a better time lol. I just finished watching the Last Song and I am still trying to stop crying, so I thought I needed a healthy dose of hockey fan fic lol. Great update and I loved that he stopped by her work even if it was to drop something off. Keep it up and I'll be waiting paitently for more

oh Patrick you are so cheeky ;)
ohh hes coming over for dinner xD i wonder how grandpa will take that!
i cant wait for the next one!!

Sounds super cute!

Grandpas...what would the world be without them? Even if just for a laugh.lol

I like it so far =)

Oh man this story is adorable so far!
I absolutely loved the first chapter!
I love the grandparents.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Aww, the Grandpa bit was too cute...and a little funny.
I loved the start!

Great first chapter! and lol I'm trying not to laugh about ur grandpa, but that's just too funny. I can see my grandpa doing that lol. Well good luck on ur mid-term and I can't wait fro the next chapter

awsome start.. im rlly exited to see the rest! awsomme!!

this is good so far!!!!
hahaha awwww her grandparents are so cute!!
lol at grandpa and the olive oil!
more soon!

ahh p.kane <3 love it so far :)

Hahahah, olive oil forreal? That's too funny. Grandpa's do the darndest things.

Aw, I love P.Kane.

I really like so far, it is really cute keep it up and update soon :D

Super excited for this chapter. Great job honey