Don't Pretend - Comments

This is soo good so far.
I'm sorry I didn't read it till now D: but it's amazing.
It really is.
I really hope that you can update this soon so I can read what happens next!
:)

Aww, i really like this so far.
Can't wait to find out what's wrong with Charlie!
Update soon =]

OH MY F*CK!!
This is really good. So interesting and really made me want to read more.
It's very original too, I like that.
Your writing style fits perfectly with this and I can't wait to read more.
Update soon.
<3

I'm loving this. It's so interesting and just wonderful.
I want to know what Charlie has though D:
I'm excited to see what happens next
<3

This is really good so far! I wanna know what's wrong with her. Update soon! : D

Tom and Charlie meet again! I love how the first thing Matt said was “Aye, are yeh Tom’s new girl friend?” I have a feeling he is always going to be the one to tease Tom, silly Matt :) Oh no! Charlie is coughing up blood again! I wonder what she's sick with? I'm happy that Amanda came to check on her though, Charlie needs a best friend to help her through this.

Likeing the story line. People named charlie are always bomb. xD. The first line said Miss eliot! That was an awesome line. The banner ive no idea why, but it held me captive for a bit. All in all awesome so far

Just read the 3 chapter, and I don't know what to say. I mean it was a wonderful chapter but then the ending just left you like," o: I need to know what's going on! Is Charlie ok? What are the people and Tom going to think? " So overall, lovely chapter with a good cliff hanger. :) Can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work,love!
P.S. First commenter for the 3 chapter! :D

I'm loving the story line so far. Hopefully there will be lots of chapters to come because I can sense this is going to have some serious drama and I'm going to be falling and more in love with it,chapter by chapter. In this story does it have anything to do with BMTH? Just wondering because they sure would make this even more interesting but maybe a little too much going on. You know? Anyone can't wait for chapter 3! Take your time but I can't wait!

I'm loving this so far :)
Post often okay!!

Tom makes his first apperance! We can all tell it's him because of those electric blue eyes of his :) Seriously, it should be a crime to have eyes that dreamy. I wonder how they are going to meet the next time? Also, I totally do what she did on the plane, press my forhead right against the window till I get a massive red mark on it. I end up walking into the airport looking like a idiot haha.

Not enough people really take the time to think of all they want to do and see in life, until they actually have a time limit to do it. I love how Charlie wants to live in England, which makes sense because otherwise how would she meet Tom? Anyways, the point of this comment is to tell you I think the first chapter is very interesting and I can't wait for more :)