Right Where We Left Off - Comments

so cute and adorable. and just.. loved it.

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“What fuck are yer doin’?!” I yelled loudly, not thinking.

Oli’s head shoot up at me with a frown across his face. “What? I’m doin’ my shoe lace up.” "
hahahahaha
LOL!!!
i was seriously laughing out loud!!!

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Oli had gotten it. "
yay!

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“So…what do yer think?”'
hmm...its nice that he didnt snapped..cuz her reaction was screaming "no"

nice one :)))
I love long chapters/one shots! :)

That is too cute :) You're such a good writer. All your stories are amazing :D

Haha That was cute :)

D'awwwwwww. It was like the cutest thing I've seen all day.
Good job muffin.

Alright. Me commenting you know that shit is going to go down ( as in a not normal comment length ) but first i would like to apoligize for my typos in advance, coz im on an ipod touch. And i wasnt exactly the best speller before hand with my actual monitor and keyboard. Okieee.

So. Where do i start? Lemme this out. Holy fucking ballsack, she wrote something. Cause you know, your studys, they come first. I just shit my pants just to find out about this one shot. The story is off the chain man. Shufflin threw shit she finds a little black box, and she basically flips the sht out. I mean who wouldnt right? When he walked in right then and there, i thought he was gunna catch her going through everything. She leaves (without the keys) goes tells her friend, who has the key. Ahahahahaha what bad fucking luck. Reminds me of myself and my own bad luck. And goes, texts oli, gets the boxes and oli comes and helps her out. Cue the awwwww. .... I deffienetly awwed, i know it wasnt supposed to be cute but im such a sucker :p

Sexy sex in the office?wink ;) ahaha man. I swear i thought i was gunna get a sex scene on it. I was sad, needless to say. Yeah. I was thinkin of that.pshaaaa. I love the most how she has those mini heart attacks everytime oli gets close to her, cause she thinks hes gunna purpose, and how she tryz to keep to herself and away from him, thinking that she can just run aeay from it, and its never going to happen. She likes to think so. And DAMNNNNN is this girl paranoid.

'what if he proposes in frot of eveyone nd there expecting a yes?'

'what if he has i with him now?'

'what if it tears him to peices and he gets angry and we breakup?"

" what about the fucking dog? We havent even gotten a dog yet!!!' ahahahahah that was funny :3

Wowwww. Seriously lady, what if i fucking had 7 legs after crawling out of someones ass. She has to realize that its gunna happen sooner or later and its completely inevitable, cause she did mention that theee boy is stubborn. Speaking of him... You really shouldnt put up banners that fucking sexy if yo knew i was gunna have a heart attack, and choke on my own spit. True story, btw. Back to the story, she finds herself going to matts for drinks with him when there both pretty ticked off. They makeout kiss, makeup, THEN

Oli ties his shoe. That was the most brilliant thing ever. I love you, cause that made me laugh so hard.

Finlly oli comes to his senses, and finds out why shes been all woooooo. Fucking new albumn!!!!! Im fucking fucking excited. Yeah i did that twice on purpose. So anyways, ifeel like im writng a book, and my thumbs hurt like a mofo. But you bet on your lucky charms it was worh it. Im stoked for the update on ithadtobeyou. I want them to fuck :3 to be bluntt. But yeah. Ahahaha. Wow im a jackass. Sorry im a asshole. Hahah. So thanks for this one shot x] it was of good uze to my time .

Pleasure reading your storys

This was adorable! I really liked it :)

I looooove this. You knew that, though. They're just so cute. :D