I liked it a lot. I mean, your writing style is very, very different from mine. But I loved it. It was so cute, and I love the picture on the background and for the banner. Theyre perfect for them, lol.
Just a couple points to make, there're a couple of silly typos to look out for, like writing of instead of on. Also, there're a couple of sentences that were a little redundant to read, since they basically said the same thing frontwards and backwards, if you know what I mean. But overall, I loved it.