Pleasure and Pain - Comments

hey i kinda just stumbled across this story but its really good so far. i love your writing style, it really engaging.....

hey just read your story and it was awesome it literally made me cry I loved the ending so much great job this story should be published

great story :) sad its over :/ you know wich one i really miss? "kidnapped by my..."

Loved this story! <3

Okay, I know this story is fiction but i have to say this. MATT TUCK YOU ARE ONE SICK MOTHER FUCKER! okay outta my system(: and this only goes for the story because in reality Matt Tuck, you are sexy awesome!

Finally got around to reading the last few chapters. I loved the ending, I so saw the proposal coming ;) I'm glad that Tuck is gone for good, and that Moose turned good at last minute :D It really was a well-planned story. Brian and Bianca were so cute in my head! Especially when they danced with the baby (: Excellent story. I bid it adieu with sadness.

this story was so awesome.........keep writing!!! :)

this story was so awesome.........keep writing!!! :)

Absolutely amazing story. You always seem to write the best stories. Keep them coming and I will keep reading.

It's all over now..Jolene and Matt can finally be together without a problem. I'm glad that Matt never doubt Jolene would leave him again willingly. Aww I love how he proposed to her :D
I'm so happy for all of them.

I just now had a chance to catch up on this and finish it! I loved everything about this story. It was written so well, and there was not a dull moment in the entire thing. Your writing always seems to capture so much attention, and you draw the reader in like no one else can! I really adored this story, Kari, and I can't wait to read more from you!

I just wanted you to know how much I love your story. It was great, and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. :)

I'm so going to miss this story but it was a great story and I guess it had to end

That was the best ending ever <3
I'm so sad that it's ending though....
I'm glad that they're going to have their happily ever after :]
they deserve it...

Wow four chapters in one day!
Man that has got to be a record!
Wow first of all, I am glad that Matt didn't believe for one second that Jo betrayed him and Moose confirming that Jo went to Tuck because he blackmailed her.
And there were others that also believed that Jo wouldn't let herself be taken so easily unless it involved someone she loved and cared deeply for.
I think Matt was just making himself believe that he did love Jo but in reality he loved to control her, have her submit to his every demand.
And he finally losted it when he forced Jo to lie down in the blood while he had his way with her.
He is one twisted sick heartless bastard, but I am glad that Matt killed Tuck for what he did to Jo in the past and what did for a whole week.
And Moose came in helped bring Tuck down since he is very much still in love with Mary and wanted her back.
And I am extremely happy that Henry is dead because now Jo can live happy with Matt without ever thinking about him ever again.
Awwww the Matt proposed to her was extremely cute and adorable!
This story is freaking amazing and I happy that both Jo and Matt finally together at last with no one holding them back.
I look forward to the new stories you will come out with!!!!!!
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my goodness! I absolutely loved it! It was brilliant.

It was heartbreaking to read with what Tuck does to Jo, but Matt comes through in the end.

Definitely will be re-reading this one again.

Loved it <3

Great ending!!!!
Love it!!!
too bad it's over!!!!!!!

And it came to an end(: I'm not embarrassed to say that I smiled like an idiot the WHOLE ENTIRE last chapter. I loved this story so much, and I'm SO glad that it came to a happy ending! :)

I don't know where to start about how I felt about this story through the process of you writing it, Kari. It's just phenomenal, and I truly love all the emotion and heart you put into it. It's just so brilliantly written, and everything is so clear and lovely and it's just...it's so vivid. At first, I thought she was going to end up just being with Tuck in the end and having a sad ending. And then for awhile, I thought she'd be back with Matt for awhile and that they'd have a happy ending. Then I see-sawed back and forth for awhile. This story has been one hell of a roller coaster ride, and it's been one of the most remarkable stories of yours yet.

From the beginning, Jolene was someone I could relate to. Not because of her addiction or her struggle to be with the man she loved, but because she's a real character. I could picture her clearly in my head; I can imagine all her little quirks and the small facets of her personality that make her who she is. She's just a phenomenal character; she's so in tune and in depth and honestly, I feel as though I could run in to her on any given day. She's not just a name written on a screen, she's a person, if that makes any sense at all.

Likewise with Matt. Matt's character in this was just fucking phenomenal. It was clear that he loved Jo from the beginning, but it was also very realistic that he had attempted to move on and be happy with Val. Speaking of Val, I loved how you wrote her in this story. Her character meshed so well with everyone's, and you didn't take the easy way out and just pawn her off as being an evil bitch who stole Matt. You made her an innocent casualty of love in this story, and I loved that. Matt cared about her but it was always evident that his heart didn't truly belong to her. I find myself hoping and believing that Val has moved on with someone that she could give her heart to as completely as she did Matt. She deserves a happy ending, and in my mind, she has one. :)

Tuck, however....You've completely thrown me for a loop with him. If I had to pick one "evil" character from every story I have ever read on Mibba that made me actually hate the character and think differently about him in every story he showed up in....it would be your version of Matt Tuck in this story. He's such a bad ass, and such an evil one at that. He's so cold and brutal and it's just so remarkable that he's so incapable of feeling love, even though he constantly apologizes for hurting Jo. He's the most selfish character in this story, and I love that about him. It's so realistic and you've made him such a hateable character that (while I still am a fan of BFMV and love their music and respect Tuck incredibly) I don't think I'll ever be able to see him being a good guy in fanfiction ever again. And that, Kari, is fucking phenomenal. Never before has my view of someone's personality in fanfiction been so swayed, and you're the writer who's done it. :)

And then there's the story itself. Everything is just...I can't even begin to describe how this story makes me feel, Kari. I would do a little happy dance in my chair every time I saw an update. I laughed and cried with the characters. I found myself getting mad when they did, gettting sad when they did, and I, at times, felt my heart breaking for the sheer emotional capabilities of your writing. In this single story, you've taken readers to another world and it's an incredible one.

And now, to end this novella of a comment, I'll just say that I really appreciate this story and I'm very thankful that you wrote it, and I absolutely cannot wait to see what you have up your sleeve next. =D

i knew tuck was going to do something. awesome twist!