Hmm, Kaesie. This is actually AMAZING. I don't think I could write a chapter for this story, frankly because it won't be as good as your chapters. Yikes. (: But I'll try.
I like this so far, it seems like a very unique idea and could go so many different directions that it's really interesting. I love the title, it seems very unique and there is something about it that just fits the tone of the story so far. I think I'm going to subscribe, as I love stories like this, as the character so far seems very easy to relate to, which I like.
I love the idea of finding messages in a bottle, it sems rather cute and the image you used for the layout is perfect! I think you should probably edit the layout slightly though as you used the fantasy font and sometimes on certain computers it's quite hard to read. I'd either make it a bigger size or use a different font for the story area- it's fine for the titles. Just because sometimes people report stories because they can't read it, due to certain fonts. Just a heads up.
Anyway, I really like this story, and I look forward to the next chapter :D