Mad Like Me - Comments

Aww, that was really cute.
I love your way of typing, and the whole plot. You're talented! :3

Aw, thank you! And thanks for telling me about the seperate paragraphs thing. I write without indenting and add the indents in later, but I guess I'll work on that.

You have a way with words. You summary was short and sweet and your story flows really well. I really like what it’s about, too. It sounds like your story is going to be really interesting. The only thing I have to mention is that your dialogue is supposed to be spaced out into separate paragraphs when a new person speaks. Your story can get reported for that, so I just wanted to let you know.

The prologue was really sad, but I liked it. I think you did a good job describing how her parents were feeling and not just her.