Weeping Angels - Comments

It was short, but definitely heart wrenching.
You've created something beautiful once again
<3

This was really nice and honest.
Although, I don't think she should have said go home to the people at the funeral and Marie stepped down and waltzed back to her seat, glancing at the coffin to her right. - That line was unrealistic. I don't think she would have waltzed back to her seat if this is a funeral. Waltzing is something perky and happy, despite what she said, she wouldn't have done it.
Everything else was perfect though and the emotion was great.
Well done. <3

This was cute and had charm (:
It was sad, but like I'm too happy to cry. You did well, beautiful work.<3

thats really truthful and thats why I like it because it captures that truth so simply.

I would tell you I was crying while reading this, but that's for a different reason. But I would have cried reading this regardless.
I loved how you set this up and although I thought her speech was slightly harsh when she told people to go home, I thought that this was beautiful and that you wrote it perfectly for the scene that it was set in.
I'm sorry for this terrible comment, today's not my day.

I love it. I really do. I think it was nearly perfect in the way she held her speech. Yes, I would've loved at least some personal information or memories of her dad, only to make it more personal. I mean, the other guests obviously knew her dad too, and should've known how great he was, just like you said... but he's her daughter and she would've known some things they didn't. I don't know, I would've loved one extra line mentioning something about their special bond. But I still loved it, it was very short and simple, yet it suited the storyline.

Why is she so, like, mean about it? I mean, if it were me, I would be bawling up there. But it is super sad. Good job.

*weeps excessively*

This was so sad and beautiful.
I would have prefered that you made it longer, but I also like it how it is now.
It has a certain charm. A sad one, yes, but a charm all the same.

<3

This made me start to cry. It really is beautiful, my grandfather might be dying so this really...just got to me. I really do like this, it's amazing.<3

AHH! WEEPING ANGELS! . . . Oh. This isn't Doctor Who fiction. . . Alright.

This was very sad, but very good. You captured the emotions of someone who lost a very close loved one beautifully.

Great job.

That was absolutley beautiful. It made me want to cry a little bit too. I know your journal was about shortening your drabbles, but if you write consistentally like this, you don't really have to change a thing.

This was so true. I really hope I'll never have to be in that position any time soon, but that's probably along the lines of what I'd say.
This was great, good job.

D': That's so sad, but beautiful. The girl is right. Luckily, I have never lost anyone besides a grandpa I never really knew, and eight hamsters.
Good job.