Eyebrows furrowed, Elizabeth spooned another mouthful of ice cream into her awaiting mouth as she listened to both the Angels game and her best friend talking. “That’s…weird, Sam. It doesn’t sound like anything Jimmy would usually do,” Elizabeth said softly before muttering a curse as the apposing team gained a run...
- WOMAN! YOU HAVE CAPTURED THE ESSENCE THAT IS ME DURING THE WEEKENDS! XD Although I would have flipped my shit rather then muttered "fuck" when/if the Angles were losing.
And FML, Sam killed herself. -_- I would have loved to read what Jimmy and everyone else would have done when they found out she killed herself. Though the one-shot is good as is. :D
Very well done! I'd really like to see this made into a full length story; it would be very interesting to see how Jimmy deals with things, and whether or not he was in time for Samantha. But very well done; good luck!
^_^