It's Time To Sleep - Comments

Aww this is beautiful <3

This was so touching!
Especially for me, because I am one of those people who's children will be there whole life.
If I ever got raped or hated the person who fathered my child I would still love the baby whole-heatedly.
It's not an innocent child's fault.
Thank you for this!
I really like the point of view this was in, but I didn't really understand it was rape until you pointed it out in the author's note.
I suggest you write a little bit extra and try to include that because it makes the story feel all that more powerful.
Good job though!

At first, I really didn't get what you meant by "his other half". I was like, THE BABY HAS SPLIT PERSONALITIES?! Haha! Anyhoo, that was really lovely. Amazing job! <3

Your layout is beautiful!
Your writing is phenominal!
And Jesus Christ, I can not believe you put all that emotion and painted such a beautiful picture with only a few words.
You're one fucking kick ass writer dude. Never stop writing cause your fucking awesome at it.
Do you happen to see what you have fucking caused? I'm cursing up an excited storm cause of you!

This was great. Ahhh! Now I have to take a Prozac. Thanks Samtastic!

I don't curse one bit but holy beavers this makes me want to shout curse words to the moon and hope they choke on stars, missy.<3

I love this. Like for serious, love. The message was just so deep. You displayed a very dysfunctional relationship (or broken one) and you showed how strong the bond between mother and offspring can be. Such this big ginormous wallop in so few words.<3

The picture reminded me of those Pixar movie things. The man on the moon? Yeah, that. :)
<3 And of course, they layout was gorgeous.

Gewd Job.<3 :D

The layout was lovely.
This was quite emotional and well written.
I didn't quite understand it was rape so maybe you should have had made that more clear rather then saying it in the author's notes.

The banner for this was really pretty, and I like the layout a lot too.
As for the writing, I thought it was great. I liked it, it was short and sweet.
You have a great talent for writing, I might add. It was a super nice read.
It was a little sad knowing that her baby was the cause of a rape but that made the story all the more interesting.