Chaotic Love - Comments

This was good :D
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Amazing :)
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I totally giggled at that picture. XP

The story was very good. The description (even with as short as it was) was very powerful and created imagery very well.

I was a bit confused as to what was going on, but that comes with a story this short. And, by the end, I think I figured it out. Mutant sex, yes? XD

I really liked this. It was done wonderfully. Great job!

That was beautiful.

At first, the banner was awfully questionable and distracting, but it became part of the beauty of that pure, raw emotional scene you described. I loved it--it was just love and need, simply and wonderfully.

You're a fabulous writer, remember that!

I also thought, WTF IS GOING ON THAT PICTURE?! I think it's really pretty, though, haha! I really like the fast pace of this. It flows nicely as well.
And er. People getting naked in the hallway?I thought it was only at my school. LOL! Jk x]
Anyhoo, this was lovely. Amazing job! (: <3

I had to share this: Before I even started reading this, I looked at the right corner of the picture trying to figure out if those were cans of cola, or the guy that's flying out the window's shoes. : )

The drabble is fast pace and racy. :D I don't really know if racy fits but I wanted to say it was, tehee. But on a more serious note, it really is fast pace and flow-y. :) Once you catch its groove, it's a pretty nice read.

I like how all the lonely people (not the in love people) got crushed by the ceiling. :) Odd thought, I know. But I found this extremely romantic. It makes their love seem heavy--real. I really like the concept of that kind of love, or true love. Ah! I'm type-rambaling.

Another point I liked was the fact that they lost themseleves in each other--that their worlds started over. :) It was cute and nice, and amazing. The only awkward thing I found about that was the small fact that they were getting nakie in a school hallway, aha. x)

Don't let my small pokes of humor fool you, I really do love this. :)
I'd have to say this is my favorite so far.<3

At first I was like "Whoa, what's going on with that picture?"
It doesn't matter that the drabble doesn't need to make sense, which is why I'm not going to bother saying that I didn't understand it. :)
But really. I liked how you described everything. And it's true: people look better without a crap-ton of make-up on.
GORGEOUS.

That was so quick.
Have you ever tried drabbles?

This was good so interesting. <3

AWWWWWWWW.
The picture is so lovely and perfect for the story.
Your emotion in the story was amazing.
I really like it.
It's adorable. :D

First of all - I adore the picture for some reason xD.
I love it, and I think the layout is nice.
Anyways! Now for the story.
As I was reading this I was able to actually picture this, and it was just so cute.
Another thing, I for some reason really liked this line, Lights danced around us, explosions were set off and all the things around us frantically began to cower.
I don't know something about it.
But I liked this, short but very good :)

I like the sort of ethereal feel to this.
How unrealistic it is kind of made it all the more better for me.
At first, I was wondering how that picture went with the story, but in the end it managed to fit.
She seems like a sort of goddess, one who has power over everything and anything.
When she came into the picture a sort of magic seemed to happen and that really made it feel powerful to me.

That was fast. And full of imagery. I got a bit confused, but that's just cause I'm stupid. It's okay.

The layout's a bit hard to read. Maybe brighten up the letters, but otherwise I love it!

You did a good job! You should probably edit the grammar a teeny bit, but well done! :D