Frozen Prince - Comments

I like this alot. I like how it's creepy and eerie. Your descriptions are incredible and I love how you describe the wind, the house, the entire setting. It painted an extremely vivd picture. I love this. Great job :]

I really didn't like the layout, the color was a bit too bold and the pictures were in an awkward spots to me.

The story, however, I absolutely adored. It was eerie and sad but written amazingly well. The imagery you used was amazing, and it felt like I was there with the two children. It was really sad but beautiful all the same. Great job :)

The picture of the statue was eerie, and the story was very sad at the end.
Though it was sad, this was beautifully written.
I felt like I was in the mind of a poetic prince :3

Frozen people remind me of Twilight vampires. O.o

I liked the picture, and I don't really understand why people are complaining so much about the layout. If they don't like it, they can change it to the default layout. It's not about how it was formatted, it's the story that counts, and as creepy as it was, I liked it.
It was really sad and depressing, but I loved the comparisons you did.
At first, I thought the girl was older and so was the boy and they were strangers, but they ended up being two little gets, freezing to death. :O
Very upsetting.
Real tear jerker. :/
I liked it. (: That's all that matters. ;D
<3

Okay, to be honest - I don't like the layout all that much. :\ But, it doesn't really matter.

Onto the story:
I thought it was quite interesting. Like everyone else said; it was very descriptive and creepy. I think you wrote it really well. [: Great job.

I agree with Purple.Rose.Garden and Shed Your Yellow it was creepy and your descriptions were really good. I wasn't too fond of the layout but I did really like the picture you used for it. This was actually very beautifully written and I love the concept you used for it about them freezing to death. Great job.<3

Wow. This is my favorite kind of story to read on here.

It's haunting, and eerie. What I like!

Well done.

A frozen princess, with still breath. My sister 6 years of life 6 years of beauty.
And what of me?
A frozen prince, with only an extra 4 years to her 6?
Maybe soon....

The layout was pretty cool. The way you mounted the picture was awesome!

Honestly, this was really creepy, but in a good way.
Dead people creep me out :D

But I really liked it. Your descriptions were so crisp and clean, I could really paint the picture in my head.
I understood the story and felt the emotion and longing.

Personally, I loved this <3

^ lol it's all good and thanks I'll consider changing things around =]

The way this was formatted kind of turned me off to the whole thing.
The layout was kind of...meh. It wasn't very attractive to be honest.

The story itself was interesting.
I really enjoyed the concept of it, and to be honest it was just...
yeah. IT wasn't really my cup of tea.