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  • kelly09

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    Update soon if you get the chance! I love this story, I'm dying to know what happens next! =)
    November 25th, 2013 at 04:15pm
  • tchalla

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    Why must you leave us in suspense?! ): I need more!
    July 16th, 2013 at 03:25pm
  • kelly09

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    I'm glad you updated :)
    July 15th, 2013 at 07:07am
  • Angie_luvs_cookies

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    I never comment but I was really liking this story and honestly the pregnancy thing killed it for me. I'm not gonna lie I love Riley but the characters are still young. I would love to read a story where the girl becomes strong and independent and happy before she finds the right guy or end ups pregnant.
    March 26th, 2013 at 08:43am
  • kelly09

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    I would like to see Kali and Riley end up together! I'm sooo glad you updated! :)
    March 26th, 2013 at 06:39am
  • kelly09

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    Please upload soon! I miss this story
    October 22nd, 2012 at 04:33am
  • kelly09

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    I'm glad Riley did that. He deserved it. I really want Riley and her together! Update quick if you can it's really an awesome story!
    August 8th, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • kelly09

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    So I just noticed your status on this story and just wanted to say I hope whatever is going on in your life to make it suck gets better.
    June 10th, 2012 at 08:21am
  • appley92

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    I have multiple things to say :)

    One, holy shit I love this :DD Riley is such an asshole because he's been fucking other girls and do he can't really be mad that she's been fucking brad even though Riley is obviously in love with Kali :)

    Two, fuck mila.

    Three, all the shit that's going on in life right now? It will get better. swear to god sweetie, I went through it all except my mom bring in jail. is your friend ohk? And are you ohk?

    Four, update as soon as you can! I'm on the edge of my seat ;)

    <3
    May 8th, 2012 at 06:16am
  • kelly09

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    I like Riley! I think he was upset because he loves her. I want her to end up with him!
    May 7th, 2012 at 05:51am
  • cocaine.white

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    Talk about drama! So much going on in this story but I love it. Why did Riley react that way? Brad and Mila are assholes, they deserve each other, haha. Not in a million years I would have seen coming the Ayva situation. Anyway, I like where this is going! :) Update soon!
    May 7th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • CAFFEINE!!!

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    I love it! The only thing I'd like to point out is that your use of drug is incorrect. You said something to the affect of "He drug me to his car" when it should be "He dragged me to his car". That's the only issue I have though! Otherwise, it was awesome:D
    May 7th, 2012 at 02:55am
  • kelly09

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    Pleeeeeease update
    April 16th, 2012 at 09:27am
  • horserideraja

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    I cried a little on that last chapter... Please update that was too intense
    February 15th, 2012 at 04:57pm
  • tanyavsqz

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    This story is getting better and better!!
    December 26th, 2011 at 10:43pm
  • iRawrPurplePandas

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    Amazing story!!!
    Can't wait to see what happens next!!
    December 26th, 2011 at 08:26am
  • appley92

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    i love this :))) definitely worth the wait!

    and LOVE that outfits. bitches are just bitches. no haters :D lol.

    im feeeeellinnng a chappterrrrr 13 commmingggg sooonnn !!!! :) haha.
    November 28th, 2011 at 01:09am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    I knew her "best friend" was bad news I just had a feeling!
    November 26th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • tanyavsqz

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    Worth the wait!! Update soon!
    November 22nd, 2011 at 07:55am
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Please do update soon! I really like this!
    November 22nd, 2011 at 05:47am