I never comment but I was really liking this story and honestly the pregnancy thing killed it for me. I'm not gonna lie I love Riley but the characters are still young. I would love to read a story where the girl becomes strong and independent and happy before she finds the right guy or end ups pregnant.
One, holy shit I love this :DD Riley is such an asshole because he's been fucking other girls and do he can't really be mad that she's been fucking brad even though Riley is obviously in love with Kali :)
Two, fuck mila.
Three, all the shit that's going on in life right now? It will get better. swear to god sweetie, I went through it all except my mom bring in jail. is your friend ohk? And are you ohk?
Four, update as soon as you can! I'm on the edge of my seat ;)
Talk about drama! So much going on in this story but I love it. Why did Riley react that way? Brad and Mila are assholes, they deserve each other, haha. Not in a million years I would have seen coming the Ayva situation. Anyway, I like where this is going! :) Update soon!
I love it! The only thing I'd like to point out is that your use of drug is incorrect. You said something to the affect of "He drug me to his car" when it should be "He dragged me to his car". That's the only issue I have though! Otherwise, it was awesome:D