aww poor Jon. I feel bad for him. he's broken and it kills to see him like that. Pat being there for him is sweet. that's a friend. keep up the fantastic job!
awww Jonathan! just him being so broken and crying made my heart hurt for him! but Kaner being there to make it all better was just so... i cant even! i love this! i love your writing! its all so great!
I love this story already. I actually were hoping they were going to get divorced, they're relationship seemed so perfect in Guild The Lily and its good to see she wasn't the best person. It was great to see the epic bromance of Kane and Toews. :)
After reading Guild the Lily i so did not see this plot twist coming! ahhh loving the Bromance foreshadowing.... it is foreshadowing right? TEAM PAT ;D Hahaha
I...wow. I love this so far. I'm so excited to see where you take this. I think with your style of writing and the plot line this story is going to be amazing. I was shocked that they weren't together but I'll get over it. Keep up the amazing work!!