I'm glad your back. I had to re-read all of this because I forgot most of the characters, but t was worth it.The characters are a bit cliche with their punkish looks and rebel way, but they have some redeeming qualities.
Okay, so I found your story in the contest we both entered, and I must say, this is amazingly well written. I love how descriptive you are. Please update!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hooked :D
This is very good, I like it. The summary had me hook right away, I loved the summary. It had me wanting to read more. This different and I like that. Overall this is very good, I'm not fully hook but I will be reading more :)
I kinda feel bad for Frankie. Haha. Even though she's a bitch, I'd probably kill myself if that happened to me. XD And Harley's scene...holy SHIT. I really hope she gets help for that. I know how she feels, but she definitely needs help. What am I talking about? THEY ALL NEED HELP. Lmao. But then again...they're problems are what makes the story epic and dramatic! So...never mind, no help. BAHAHAHA. Sooo yea, great update, dahlin'. I can't wait to read more. Cmnt4cmnt?!?!?!?!?! Ohyes. Kloveyouuubyeeee.<3[:
OHMAHGAH!!! Derek's going to be in all sorts of trouble. XD I know if I were Frankie, I'd be like, "WTF IS WRONG WITH MEEE?! AM I TOO LOOSE?!" Lmao. But in all seriousnessss here, I really liked this chapter. Like, for reals. The sex scene was good. Not too drawn out. And you portrayed Derek's internal conflicts very well. I can't wait to see what happens with that. :] So yea. Cmnt4cmnt?! I don't think you've read the past couple updates of All Your Power Crumbles, missy!! Lol. Moreee soon!! Loveyouuu. <3[:
AHHHHHH. You updated epically fast. BOO YA. I'm sitting here wondering if anything is going to happen between Alecia and Harley. =O That'd be like..epic. XD This story seriously can go so many ways, and that's what makes it great to read. You neverrrr know what's going to happen! So yea, awesome job. And HURRAY for ten stars. I bet you're happy I showed you that little bit of information, huh? ;D More soon, dahling!! Loveyouuu. <3[:
If you want more comments you have to pimp your story out,try comment swapping in thejournalsection. Please update quicker,I. can't really get into the story yet.
Omfg dude...Jeremy DOES have a problem!! 25 girls over the span of a year?! That boy needs help. I hope Zeb can convince him of this before something bad happens. But yea, this chapter was great!! You're doing an awesome job with this.[: AND MORE PEOPLE NEED TO COMMENT PRONTO! Because I don't want you to leave mibba. >.< No, no, no. More soon, please?! Iloveyouuu. <3333
Okay, comment! =] This is a very good story- a bit confusing for me, but I'm slow sometimes. I definitely like it though. Please don't delete your account
Kso, I just read this from last night when you told you updated. XD Anddd I still love this story. I can't wait for when shit goes down hardcore and everythaaang. This && Stain are my favoriteeees.[: & more people should comment so you can update soon!!! Because I loveeee this. Cmnt4Cmnt? Yes, please. Iloveyouuu<3.
Epiccc update!! Frankie sounds like a huge bitch. Lol. Harley should definitely beat her the hell up like nowww and then steal Derek for herself cuz he's looking goooood. Hahahaaa. So yea, update this soon, definitelyyyy. It's getting amazing. I can't wait for this.
Kso, comment4comment. I just updated What Do You Want For Me? so you should go read and comment that. :]]]]