Summer Storms - Comments

Very well-written! I loved how told the setting and the emotions that each person had.
I am just sad that this won't be a developed story... :(
Did you ever win that contest you entered this in?

I love when a story has heartbreak haha. It was well-written
and a good a read, you did a good job with putting in the
right amount of details. Great job c:

Perfect length, by the way. I liked this. I agree with the layout thing, as well; nice and simple and my favorite color also... not that I let that affect my judgment... *ahem* anyway, congratulations on a story well-written. I enjoyed reading it and I thought it really flowed. The emotions were good as well; they make you feel what the characters seem to feel, and that's a mark of a well written piece. So good job. :)

Aww such a bittersweet story.

For some odd reason i liked the whole 'some silly summer fling' part. I think this was very good. You captured the emotions so perfectly, and the descriptions were wonderful. You did amazing, and I wish you the best in the contest!

:}

I really liked this. It was an interesting opening, that led into an even more interesting story.

I like the way you write. Simple enough to read through without strain, but complex enough to keep my attention. That's very well done!

I also like that it was not just some sweet, cute little story. I like it when they're more realistic. Real is good.

Great job!

I really liked this, It was wonderful. The length was perfect and I like the simplicity of the layout. Your writing style is very good and I really enjoyed reading this.

This is wonderful! I love it! :D Short but sweet - well, not so sweet, but you know what I mean.
You wrote it really well and I enjoyed it. :]

And why the FUCK would that chick up there think it was about some dude from Papa Roach? :|

is this about jacoby shaddix from papa roach?