A Cup of Tea - Comments

Awww! Adorable! so cute! I don't think your bad at writting romance! i mean, not EVERY SINGLE romance story needs to have a sex scene or dirty talk in it! This was so cute, I only found one tiny mistake, you have SICK, instead of SICKER at one point. Other than that, this was cute, adorable, sensitive, and very well written! I thought that she was going to die :O I have a sick mind, you are a very talented writer, and BRAVO!

Adorable!
You made the perfect description of an ill person.
And no, you aren't bad at writing romance.
It made me worry and smile all throughout (:

D'aw :3.
I giggled at the ending lines. I thought this was cute, and it showed what kind of a romance they had, without directly saying it. You can tell they're close and aside from being in a relationship are really good friends with each other. Cute and I liked it.

D'aw :3.
I giggled at the ending lines. I thought this was cute, and it showed what kind of a romance they had, without directly saying it. You can tell they're close and aside from being in a relationship are really good friends with each other. Cute and I liked it.

On the contrary, I think you did a very good job with writing a romance. ^^
Please tell me she gets better though! :O The ending almost made it seem like she was going to fall asleep and never wake up. But I did like how in the end he said "Do you take sugar?" Hehe.

The longer she laid there, the dizzier and sick she felt.
I think you meant to say sicker.

It really sucks being sick. :P
Anyway, really good job on this one!!

Oh my gosh! This. Is. So. CUTE. This was so incredibly sweet! I wish a guy would do that for me :|
AND YOU AREN'T BAD AT WRITING ROMANCES, GAWD! x] <3

TEA!!!!!!!! . . . I'm not a total caffeine addict at all.

I like when people start stories with coffee or tea.

I don't think you're bad at writing romances. I thought this was very sweet, and I liked the set up for it a lot. It was very good.

I thought it was cute, though quite sad and disturbing when it described Olivia's state. I wish I had a Mathew to take care of me when I'm sick. :)

What exactly do you mean when you say you're bad at writing romances?!

This was adorable, love.

And the last line made me feel all fuzzy inside.

I love this. Great job

You claim you are bad at romances, but this was very sweet. Some specific l descriptions I liked, were; Her chapped lips looked brittle as they were a paler pink than a dying English Miss rose.-I like this simile. I also like this line, Olivia looked like she would break faster than glass if dropped. I wish I had a guy like Matt - _-

The last line really made me feel warm inside, it was just so sweet. This story was just...adorable, cute, and sweet.

This was a good romance, m'love.(:
Very beautiful. <3
I didn't found it cliche, either.
Beautiful layout also. <3

hehe Matts sweet! When he was thinking something you don't need the " ".
It was written well. Something so simple as a cup of tea could make up this awesome piece of writing. I liked the layout as well.
All in all, a very good story.

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but I love your other stuff too!

this is really really adorable. I love the whole feel of it. it isn't like the others stuff. I love it.

I loved the last bit.
She'd already said how many times that she doesn't take anything in her tea and he still had to ask? And the fact that there was this big fuss about tea and by the time it was ready, she was sleeping. <3
It was cute. Too cute. ; D And, I think you're quite good at writing romance.
At one point, it said "Oliver" instead of "Olivia". Not major, but I know I'd like someone to point that out to me as well.
I really thought this was absolutely adorable and marvelously written. <3
GREAT JOB! :D

AWWW.
This is a really good romance!
The emotion was really good but maybe you could have used a bit more description.
The last line was so cute! I aw'd a million times, reading this. :D
Great job, I'd love to see more romances from you. :)