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This made me wince.
But your last sentence makes it less painful.
Good job.

I'm crying. That was so beautiful a perfect to how I feel. Thank you so much for writing that. It made me feel a millions times better about life.

Wow.
I don't think I've ever read something so beautiful.
I cried. I'm not ashamed to admit it.
I know it's been said before, but thank you. ♥

Wow...
This made me come so close to crying...It's just so real and beautiful.
The short sentences just made it even better and the last sentence was my favourite.
You put so many emotions into those sentences, wow, it was just beautiful.
It made me speechless and almost cry and yet it made me smile as well.
This is a beautiful story, just beautiful.

this made me smile and feel like crying.
just.. yeah.

you are we and we are you.

this makes so much sense, dru. just so much sense.

if you've ever found yourself in someone's stories because they've been there too.

I teared up about halfway through this.
It's just so freakin' beautiful.

Thank you...

That is all.

Thank you.

This is just... wow. I cried when I recognized myself. And I smiled when I recognized myself. And you have no idea how much this whole piece of writing hit home for me, but it did. It's almost as if you are able to put my feelings on paper (or on screen, you get the point) better than I'm able to myself. Thank you for reminding me that there are others like me out there!

I started reading your stories because I love how you portray Ryan&Brendon. But this... This is definitely my favorite piece of your writing so far. You say your words are your faith (yes, I'm a sucker for little details), well, they are kind of my faith as well. And you deserve to know that.

Beautiful.

I'm not sure how many times I nodded my head throughout this story.

I love it. I truly do.

Thank you.

This is beautiful.

We are not alone.

I just want to re-read it again and again. It's too lovely.

This was amazing.
It's so real. Everyone can relate to this in some way.
Definetely made an imprint in my mind and in my heart.
Lovely.

You know those moments in novels where some light is finally shed into your mind and you find out that those crazy thoughts you have are passing through someone else? I can't even begin to explain how relieving that is for me and this was just enlightenment after enlightenment and it was brilliant.

It's almost too real to critique.

This is amazing. Perfect, just perfect. You have no idea how many times I was nodding my head in agreement while reading this. I love it. <3

Beautiful.

You have no idea, how bloody perfect that was. I could agree with some of the things written there and when i was reading a long i was nodding my head agreeing with bits of it.
I'm glad i claimed this =)

Wow, this was something; I almost got out of breath reading this in my head! What a run on! Which on the subject of a run on I would have made it a long sentence instead of a bunch of short, unfinished ones if I were you. Anyways, this was really neat and I enjoyed reading it because I was interested in all the examples you decided to go with and I can agree with a decent few of those. What I think I liked best about this piece was the ending, how you went from this majorly gigantic list to this one short serious sentence, a really interesting way to end an interesting story – nice job.

amen.