@ Psychokitty13 I've kinda been throwing that idea around a lot, actually. And I might end up doing that, assuming I can find time. At least I know there would be people willing to read it! Haha.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay. Well stupid question/ random thought; why not start over? or take the same concept but change the plot? If not totally cool, I just thought this story was awesome and wanted to know what was to happen.
@ Psychokitty13 I honestly don't know if this story will ever be updated again. I haven't written anything in months, and to be honest, I've pretty much completely forgotten what went on in the story, and most of what I had planned for it. I'm sorry. :l
So now Emma feels really disappointed with herself since she gave in and took some of that coke. That really must have knocked her out since she was completely confused when she woke up the next day and slowly remembering what she did the night before. I wonder if any of the guys will notice that she did indeed take some drug since they are all experts on the symptoms. But I am happy that she called Aiden and got out of the house because she would really be beating herself up for taking that coke. I can't wait for more!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so her finding out that the court date is going to be in three days drove her to snort coke? Man that is a lot of stressing just building up inside her and now it got the best of her. I think I do hope that someone steps in before she gets too addicted to that drug because she will get addicted right away if no once stops her. Matt really feels bad because Emma is not going to have a very good teen life because she'll have the memories of being abused by her father and twin sister. She's both physically and emotionally scarred for life and now that she took a line of coke, she'll want that even more since it's makes her feel numb to the pain she feels. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Matt is right, Emma didn't deserve to be abused because she did nothing wrong to deserve it at all. I do hope that Christopher gets sent to jail for the physical abuse and attempted rape on her. At least Matt is letting her know that after putting her away for good, she'll be safer and won't have suffer anymore and that he is there for her. At least her friends didn't give up on her and wanted to make sure that she is okay. So Emma is really tempted to use that small baggie because of all the stress that is getting to her. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATES SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an amazing story, I can't believe it doesn't have more comments. You have done a great job of showing the pain that Emma is feeling and the confusion she feels from what is happening with her and Brian. What her father did to her is horrible but you have done an amazing job of writing about the abuse she has put up with in her life. Please update soon! You are a very talented writer(:
I'm really enjoying your story so far! I read the entire story in about three horus yesterday, and I'm glad I got around to commenting on it today. I love how you've integrated characters who are members from other bands so smoothly, and how Frank isn't all jumpy and hyper at every little thing like in every other story. I also like how you've given each character a very distinct personality, and they run pretty deep. Most writers would make their characters seem one way at first and then take them in a totally different direction without a second thought. You don't do that, I can tell you have put a lot of thought into the structure of your story. Keep up the great work! I've subscribed, so I'll definitely be checking back for updates.
Man so their parents only wanted two kids but then they got twins? Damn that is really is cold, Emma is the one receiving the hate from her parents since she is the youngest. And to have her retell everything that happened to her when Matt wasn't there has really made her emotions go wild. And when she told them about the near rape experience with father, Matt must be just pissed off that their father did something like that. So when they get home, Matt is going to want to talk to her since she is scarred from all the abuse she received from her own family. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good things Brian came to check on Emma! I know she very much tempted to take that coke so she would feel relax. Dang she is going to need all the support she needs because she's going to have to retell all the abuse her father did to her and all the secrets she has been holding on too. I wonder who it is going to be that will find that little bag in her shoe box. So she has had feelings for him before they left for tour, and the time that she spend away from them, those feelings just got buried until she saw him again. Well maybe they are going to get closer during this time. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY Brian to the rescue!!!! I knew it was going to be him!!!! XD Man her father won't just give will he, he goes to Emma's school, demands her to get in the car so what he can beat her for exposing his secret!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? It was a good thing that Brian came because her father would have gotten a hold of her. I think it would be hard for Emma to testified because she has to relive the moments where her father beat and called her degrading names. How her mother turned a blind eye and her own twin taking part in verbally abusing Emma. Aw Nate is concern of her, but he better watch out because Emma has four muscle guy and a gnome protecting her now! X3 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!