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  • Haylie Jaed

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    I figured I should come back and comment on this, since I did read it. I've been slacking with my commenting lately. =( But as I told you, it made me cry. It was just so sweet and well-written, and my heart absolutely broke for poor Matt.
    September 19th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

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    OMG OMG OMG take everything - good only! - everyone else has said and quadruple it... thats my damn response... no writer or story has ever brought tears to my eyes... until now
    September 18th, 2010 at 10:20pm
  • Mockingbirds...

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    holy fuckballs.
    this is amazing.
    beautiiful!
    September 18th, 2010 at 05:53pm
  • IThinkI'mParanoid

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    I loved this! I have a question though, where on earth did you get that amazing sexy picture of Matt in the banner? XD I want
    September 2nd, 2010 at 04:10am
  • atrocious

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    Amazing entry!
    August 26th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • LizzyVengeance

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    omg that was amazing. It made me tear up like for real, and that doesn't really happen that often. Loved the story.
    August 25th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • ShadowsFiction

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    There really are no words to describe what I was feeling while reading this. I really hope you win Whitney's contest because so far of all of the ones I have read yours was by far the best one!
    August 24th, 2010 at 05:07am
  • Gerard A Way

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    It's beautiful. Heartbreaking, extremely heartbreaking, but beautiful. I love it. <3
    August 21st, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • DontEatMyCherries

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    I think you’ve created a unique one-shot from that line. A beautiful and sad story about the loss of a loved one and the importance to accept that in order to move on in life. I got really moved by your writing; the way you express yourself in words.

    I have to say that I love the ending, it’s so important to the story. It’s sad but at the same time it brings hope. Once Matt admits to himself that Val is gone, and he won’t be seeing her again in this life, he’s able to move on, even though missing her hurts, because that’s what she would have wanted for him to do; continue living his life.

    I wish you the best of luck in the competition!
    With love,
    Frida.
    August 21st, 2010 at 06:28pm