MidNightmare - Comments

I love the story banner. It is very nice. The character seems pretty well developed. Though the story has a slight cliche feel to it, I found it was an interesting read. I hope you do write more to it. I would love to see where you go plot wise with it.

Could you maybe choose just a bit brighter blue to use for the layout? It's hard to read with black font. Just a few shades brighter would be wonderful.

This was a very interesting start though. It makes me really want to know more!

I would post a longer comment, but my brother just got home and he's really loud and annoying and I can't concentrate. I'm sorry. I'll make it up to you in the next one.