Give It to Me - Comments

Da-Da-Dakota! (100)

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THIS, MY DEAR, WAS PRETTY GOOF FOR A FIRST SHOT.
NOW.
HOW ABOUT YOU....
WRITE SOME MORE?

YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKIN' ABOUT. ;)

February 6th, 2011 at 04:49am

Lost.In.Stereo (100)

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Definitely not a fail; That was amazing, and really good for a first time smut writer.

September 19th, 2010 at 02:10am

xgrimmjowx6 (100)

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lol the no sex part! I love it so much!!!XD this the one you told me the bad stuff was in? Cuz all my stories do. But you can write them really good!:D Amazing like always!!<3

September 15th, 2010 at 02:25am

cinderella. (150)

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Okay, I'm not a slash fan, buttttttttttttttttt, I couldn't help but click on it.

Wow.
This made me laugh so hard I fell off of my chair. I love how Jack expected some sex, and how he got the date wrong.

Oh. My. God.
The only thing Jack is happy about is that he gets sex on the anniversary date!
What the fuck? Special occasions? I love it.
Alex is a smart cookie. Jack is a hormonal muffin.

And then they had sex. That was somewhat awkward for me to read...or skim through, rather. Mainly because smut is not my cup of tea. Regardless, I really did enjoy this.

September 5th, 2010 at 11:46pm

november rain; (315)

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LMFAO, classy. HAHA.
i loved that. d:
next part up soon? [x

September 4th, 2010 at 11:15am

Forever Young. (100)

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haha oh jack<3 post the next part soon pleasee! =) <33

August 23rd, 2010 at 11:03pm

Lost.In.Stereo (100)

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Oh silly Jack (:
Can't wait for part two
<3

August 23rd, 2010 at 07:18pm